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The New Bride (To Be)
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Comment by Ronnie on 10/12/09
I would if I could but I can't... go that way, that is. Comment by Early June on 01/05/06 I liked the story, Like Jesse, I too was frustrated at the complicity of the woman who had just pledged her lifelong loyalty to the man she just helped rape, inseveral ways. Yes, Jesse's epilogue seems reasonable. However the morning after pill might be a better solution than a later term abortion, or even a douche, might seem to be a little nearer to using a condom. Even an adoption would make for a happier, less killing, plot. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 01/02/06 An alternate epilogue: |
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