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New Dream Come True 5
by Paul G Jutras

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Comment by me suba on 12/20/18
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Comment by Jimmy on 09/10/03
Not too shabby Paul.  Telling the parents is one of the hardest things that a TG can face.  As you pointed out in your story, acceptance from the parents is often hard.  Sometimes the parents never face the reality that their child is TG.  Our society is just learning the true meaning of gender.

Some mechanical problems with the story that made it hard to read in places.  There are proofing tools that can help to check for sentence errors.  You have to use your own judgment when using the tools but they can help to point out obvious errors that our eyes tend to miss.

Keep writing!



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