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A New Education For The Modern Woman
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Comment by Donna on 07/19/10
Great story!!! Comment by Helena on 06/22/10 This is a great story and I wish I could have been Sam. Comment by Craig on 03/15/10 Good stuff. You have a great ability to translate the erotic imagination, which always has equal amounts of pleasure and pain (igonore prudes like Jennifer who can't tell the difference between real life and fiction). Comment by =( on 04/24/08 My goodness, how so very very sad. I would say more but it's not my place to chastise nor critisize any one for any thing what so ever. but PLEASE make haste to redeam your self with some thing as to not make me nearly cry again. but your talent is admirable. well bye Comment by Jennifer on 01/07/08 I found the story to be very disturbing because even if it is just fantasy, there is NEVER an excuse to do these things to any human being. The things described in this story show that the writer does not recognize these actions amount to a violation of every human rights law out there. It is sad that some get ideas to do this kind of stuff in real life. There are countless news stories of horrifying abuse every day. Children locked in closets for days without food and /or beaten unconscious. Please realize in the future, that your work should reflect something positive instead of feeding sick and twisted fantasies of people who can truly be described as monsters.No one deserves to be treated that way. I sincerely hope you can use your gift of writing to uplift and inspire the world for good. Comment by juliej on 01/02/08 brilliant story well worth the read well done more please |
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