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The Newest Girlfriend
by Jennifer White

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Comment by this is me on 07/28/12
The only way out would have been to turn the guy down from the start and tell his girl and hope she would understand. I have not read the rest of the story and don't think I want to. Like I said I have not read it all so I'm not really reviewing it so I can't disparage it. It just isn't in my taste starting out.

Comment by DARLENE on 07/17/07
Hi Jennifer

I think this is one of your recent best. I love the build up of consternation and the fighting to get away, only to have it all crash down into a Happy Ending.

D.


Comment by annie on 07/15/07
Thanks Jennifer, great story with a happy ending.

You touch what I always dream of happening.  I might have enjoyed it more if it ignited a spark of lust in your protagonist especially with that penetration.  He/she didn't want tbis to happen but then oh but what an orgasm. He/she girl like us yearn for breasts and penetration.  Feel free to share my email address.  I'll be a good girl and answer.  

lipstick kisses,

annie




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