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New Fantasy 15
by Paul G Jutras

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Comment by Silvia. on 03/10/10
Bad story as always!
Sorry paula, but this is true.
Silvia.

Comment by Shayla on 03/20/04
I'm a relatively new reader of storysite, but Paul, I think your quickly becoming my favorite author. I love the fact that many of the TG folks in your stories are accepted by their families. I also like the length. If a short story is good, it can remain in the memory just as easily as a long one

Comment by H R on 11/05/03
Have you ever thought of combining your storeis so that they are longer. Such as chapters 1-5. I normally do not run them off unless they are at least 4 pages. Thanks.

Comment by Sheryl S. on 10/30/03
Paul, this is the best story I've  read from you so far!  The sentiment was nice, and the enthusiasm was terrific, and your renowned dark side was used to colorful advantage without being too somber.  A really nice read.  In fact, you may wish to consider a sequel to this one.

Love and Huggz,
Sheryl S.



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