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New Fantasy 23
by Paul G Jutras

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Comment by leah on 07/25/04
Well, forgive me, Paul, but I'm having difficulty getting rid of the image of a green pea hanging on the end of your penis waiting to be wiped off. That sounds even worse than passing a kidney stone.

Yeah, right, too short a story. Once you've nicely got the groundwork laid, you had the length and breadth of the field to work your magic but decided to settle for a piddling first down. -- Ever do rewrites?

Comment by Jane Hudson on 07/25/04
I liked it

Comment by Betty on 07/24/04
I liked the story very much. However it felt as though too many things were left out and ended to soon.



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