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The New Fantasy 24
by Paul G Jutras

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Comment by suba suba on 06/09/20
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Comment by suba me on 12/19/18
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Comment by online business on 09/13/13
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Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 09/28/07
WELL, IT LOOKS LIKE YOU DID CONTINUE THE HOLLY POTTER STORY FOR AT LEAST ONE MORE CHAPTER. THANKS

Comment by Early June on 10/06/04
Nicely done Paula.  This may be your best effort yet.  You still have a few editing glitches but that too has improved immensley.
Your story telling begins to shine in these longer essays. The story held interest and drew the reader in. Thank you for sharing



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