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New Fantasy 5
by Paul G Jutras

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Comment by Cai on 01/31/03
Paul a very nice sweet story, except for the spelling & grammar errors

“Even since Archie was five years old, he knew he should have been born a girl. His parents would always shout themselves hoarse in the throat getting him to sign his name Archie instead of Annie”

“military husband was always out to sea and with luck to be in port three days in the year.”













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