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New Girl on the Block
by Janet L. Stickney

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Comment by Mariah on 04/26/13
Pretty good story I must say, The FIA probably knew the robbers would try to track the witness through any relationship or adoption records but having a boy turned girl with such a detailed paper trail would cause the robbers to slip right past it without a second thought.  

Well thought out Janet, and a happy ending as expected!


Comment by MaryLou on 06/26/09
You have a special nack - keep writing.

Comment by tanley Morton on 07/16/07
Leave it to the goverment to think turning a boy into a girl will help protect a witness. Janet, great premise as we know the goverment rarely makes sense. What was really cool was the way Sarah was made into a girl early in the story. If you do a sequel, Sarah needs to marry and actually have a child boy wanting to be a girl.

Comment by Rone Welles on 10/25/06
Crazy  but goverment is not known for "normal " thinking ..
and as this story unfolds Janets skill with the pen is shown again
the details are what dreams are made of ....

Thank you Janet L      xo Rone




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