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The New Guy
by Kimberli Nicole McCarthy

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Comment by Pam on 10/13/10
Kim, omg this was soo good and a great set up for many more chapters....as everyone here has said, you really do have great writing skills and talent, with excellent pace and dialogue....PLLEASE, come back and write some more!!  xoxo pam.

Comment by patty on 04/01/10
keep on writting, you have a real talent

Comment by Silvia    (from Brazil) on 06/19/09
Hey, You exceeded in this story!
Great,great,great, You're a great writer, don't stop writing!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by mike on 05/26/09
well written story.slow to build to that wonderful climax.loved it.

Comment by sarena on 03/10/09
good stories keep writeing you'got the gift the stories are great

Comment by Starhawk on 10/14/03
Great beginning and I certainly hope there will be more of this story K.  The ending was superb, and left me wanting more - desparately.

Cheers.

Comment by Fran on 10/14/03
I like it!  I wish I had that sort of office mate!

Fran

Comment by Sissy Demi on 10/13/03
I'd never read your stories before. I decided to try this one. It is nicely written, a great erotic she-male story, pacing was nice. I am not into she-males, either visualizing myself with them or as them, but I still enjoyed the story. Nice work! ^_^



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