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New Holly Potter
by Paul G Jutras

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Comment by Stanley Morton on 08/02/07
Well, unlike Kim, you ended the story. No need to continue. Thank you for that

Comment by Debilyn on 06/18/06
How about a simple non-magical story where Harry and Hermione just switch each other's skirt and pants, with Harry ("Holly") putting on a wig, and Hermione ("Herbert") chopping off her hair?

Comment by Kim West on 08/25/04
Congratulations on finishing your version of Holly Potter, or should I say Holly Prewett.

Kim.

Comment by Kim West on 08/21/04
The thing I liked most about part three was the fact that Angelina was only concerned about Ron still being able to play. The dynamics between Ron and Draco were fun to read as well.

Kim.

Comment by Kim West on 08/07/04
One of my favorite moments of this story is the cute scene with Luna proclaiming proudly that Harry Potter still lives. It is right up there with stories about "Elvis still lives". A very nice touch indeed Paula Jutras.

Kim.  

Comment by Jane Hudson on 07/02/04
Loved it



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