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New Life II
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Comment by Silvia. on 10/23/10
Bad story. Comment by James or James ML on 07/06/05 Well the ML is what I was called back in those day I use to belong in with my Mannequin Lover's site and I had the Nic Name ML and I use to write some stories for my site and I sent some to yes RobotDoll ect and yes this was one of them. A little Editing and this is what you get above which I don't care but it was after my story and if you know Dmuk you can varfi it with him and he will tell you the original story which I should have somewhere. I kind of made it up as yes I collect mannequins and what if I was trapped in a department store and what if I became what I collected :) Comment by Mer on 12/08/04 It was sweet. Comment by HotTouchWave on 04/30/01 Definitely different, though almost pleasant in comparison to many of the others..... Definitely held your interest until the end... Comment by tina browning on 01/31/01 Welcome to Crystal's !! This is a fun first Fantasy effort (here), altho' for me the plot outcome is rather cruel (that's why it's a fantasy, I guess). Comment by Heather St. Claire on 01/24/01 Hi! This was one of the first ASFR stories I ever discovered, and it's still one of my favorites. Whenever I want to escape the stresses of real life, I just imagine myself as the heroine! It's so nice to find a mannequin TF story with a truly happy ending. Well done! Comment by Artemis on 01/24/01 I'm the author, this isn't the second part in a series, I'm not sure why the page editors put the "II" in the title. I can only guess that there is at least one other story on this site with the same title. Comment by Paula Jutras on 01/24/01 The story on the story site says NEW LIFE 2 but when I click on it the first page only says NEW LIFE. Is there another? |
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