Rally a lovely story.

A very enjoyable story. Definitely an emotional rollercoaster.  Thank you for writing this.

i have to say thit this was one of the best story's i had read in a long time i wish i was jenny

I have just read your 4th installment and I have enjoyed reading all 4 stories. Jenny, Cathy and Prue were so lucky in meeting Sandra.

I loved every minute of this story.  It made me very emotional.  You have a great style for writing and hope to see more of it.  Please let me know when you have more to read.

Kelly

A most peculiar blend of British vernacular and errors more commonly found in the US, such as "would of" instead of "would've," and the misuse of apostrophe's in plural form's. Otherwise, what others have already said. This is an unabashed "wouldn't it be lovely if..." fantasy addressed to the rejection and brutality that TG people often face at the hands of their families, and out in the world. Wouldn't it be lovely if...there were someone out there to provide us with love, acceptance, and healing? Sigh...

Really enjoyed your story about Jenny. Hope you continue the story line so we can all see how she turns out later in life along with everyone else. Am wondering if she and her sister ever see their real, albeit, useless parents again. Hugs, J-Lynn

this was a brilliant story which had a grear flaviour about it was sweet sentimental &brilliant more please i feel this is a story that cannot be maed better i wish iytwas me in the story what a way to go well done

That was an enjoyable read. Good work!

Would you believe it, I read the story twice I liked it so much.  Keep up the good work and I certainly hope that there are more parts coming out  on this excellent piece of work.  Again, keep up the good work.  Respectfully

I really enjoyed this story ... but have a few nit pick reservations ...

First, the periods that Jenny slept seemed excessive even for pain control, unless she was actually put into a coma, which is normally only induced for brain injury.

Secondly, it seems that life in the new home is all about clothing ... what about other activities ?  There are lots of other activities that should have been filling her life even in these early days with Sandra ... like television, music etc.

And lastly, while Jenny started out at 15 yrs, she seemed to regress in her language to a pre-pubescent child.  In spite of her thankfulness to Sandra, the intensity and depth of the conversation reverted to that of a much youger child and mother.

One thought that nagged me as to why Sandra should do such a thing for Jenny and Cathy and Prue ... When all is said and done, she had hit Sandra with her car ... a possible legal nightmare with the police.  How did Sandra resolve the legalities of suddenly having a daughter ?

Apart from these reservations, this was a really enjoyable read, and a definitely different twist on a feminization story.

Wow!  I certainly hope that there is a part IV!  I would like to see a meeting with the real parents - After the revelation, Cathy and Jenny just turn and walk away. (OK, I'd REALLY like to see the dad feminized, but I suppose this isn't the story for it :-)  I'd also like to see Prue adopted and Michelle, too, so there's four equal sisters. (HEY, maybe the dad could take Michelle's place as the maid????)

It seems like Storysite has added another top notch writer to its collection. "A New Life" is intelligently written, with well drawn characters and an interesting plot. I also like the cliff hanger style endings to each episode. I'm really looking forward to the next episode. Keep up the good work and thanks for writing!

Sara UK,
   Wow!  You really did it and Part 2 was done shortly not in three months or more like some of us do (blushes with embaresment).  Great story, I can feel the love.
                                      Rose2
   

The talent you show in your first story is amazing. I do hope you have many more of this calibre floating around.

Wonderful story, Sara!  You have a real talent!  Don't stop now -- Keep writing!

My dear sweet friend!  Congradulations!  You finally wrote your first story!  And how wonderful it is too.  And I know there will be no holding you back.....   GO FOR IT GIRL!!!!  (^_^)

Sara, I knew you could do it!! Well done!!! I am really proud of you and I am SO looking forward to more of this in the future =)

ALL RIGHT, SARA!!!  You DID it!  700 hits slready and it's only been up less than a day!  That's GREAT!!!  I KNEW you had it in you!  Congratulations on your FIRST story.  I'm SO glad I didn't wreck it with my attempts at proofreading!  LOL  I'm proud of ya, Sara.
                                  Cathy_t_ said that!  :)

Well  it's here lol hope to see more in future, thanks Sara for persevering with it. and not giving up. great first story. the first one is always the hardest. huggles hon

Good begining look forward to your work.