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The New Little Stepsister
by Little Bobbi

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Comment by washington dc on 06/30/21
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Comment by suba me on 04/19/19
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Comment by suba me on 04/15/19
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Comment by jake jilennanal on 05/15/17
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Comment by sissy carla on 02/03/13
fantastic !!!!

Comment by Illie on 01/25/12
Terrible

Comment by Starbuck on 07/10/10
I didn't even get to the cruelty and etc that others have mentioned.

A 15 year old boy does NOT use the terms Mommy and Daddy unless he is mentally developmentally disadvantaged...

You start off with the main character sounding like a 6 year old and his voice never changes.  As soon as I realized he was 15 (or older) when speaking as the character, my ability to suspend disbelief was shot.

Once suspension of disbelief was gone, it became impossible to read any further.


Comment by Hannah Montana on 12/28/08
This was going okay until the sex stuff...that creeped me out and you lost me as a reader.  

Comment by tryingtounderstand on 12/11/08
This story was so cruel and inhumane that I finally had to leave it.  The autor should be totally ashamed at writing such disturbing garbage.  It is very evident that the author hates men and is a very domineering person.  Why not try writing something with love and respect instead of something filled with abuse, "slavery" which went out with the Civil War here in America and the Civil Rights movement, and outright sickness.  If this is the best you can write,.......stop writing.  There are many stories on this site that I thoroughly enjoy reading...but this was a mistake to even begin and I am very sorry that I thought it was worth reading.  Shape up or get out of the writing business.  If this seems unkind...well if the shoe fits....wear it.

Comment by CATHY ANGELA DAVIS on 07/10/08
THIS WAS A VERY CRUEL STORY FOR NO REASON, IF THERE IS A REASON FINE, I BELIEVE IN PETTICOAT DISCIPLINE, BUT THERE WAS NO REASON HERE.

Comment by Dianna on 04/12/08
how cruel! This, like so many other feminazi/forced sissification stories, is a recipe for suicide. Sadly, I highly doubt that the logical conclusion will be reached, and instead the poor dear will follow along meekly. Or will adopt a 'well I like what they are doing because blah  blah blah'.

/sigh.

Methinks that the author should sit down and examine the character's reactions and decide if they are realistic or just there for the sake of justifying and continuing a story of cruelty.


Comment by Danielle on 11/23/06
I'm Shocked at the amount of this kind of fanasy! What has happened to the world that all this hate and horror is growing to epedemic proportions! Kindness and gentility are being punished while hatred and evil are being applauded and saluted! These women are worse than any MALE rapist or abuser. How can this be condoned by any of you? I am willing to bet that if the shoe was on the other foot there would be all kinds of wailing and crying! The Author obviously has issues that need serious therapy!!!!

           I am NOT impressed!

                           Dani


Comment by mist on 07/25/06
Why has the author not written any more hot stories like this. This story rocks.

Comment by Phrilly on 02/09/06
Excellent story , very hot .

Comment by Allan on 03/01/05
This a great story and should be continued. But please keep  the diapers, panties and little sissy girl cloth in the story

Comment by jasmine on 11/19/04
as they go deeper and deeper they go into submission and rape. the deeper they will decend into a black depression. a suicide will seem to be the only excape availble to the two abused and mistreated sissies. what a horror, they would run away or seak help, or the father would bring in the police if only to protect his children.

Comment by sissy brenda on 11/18/04
both my wife and i love it.Wife says she hopes you teach the sissies how to please each other as well as real men                                     thank you MS.Carol and sissy brenda

Comment by Languish on 11/17/04
Now I think all of them need to be knifed.  That's just horrible.  If "Mommy" didn't want a wuss for a boyfriend, then why not just kick him out, it's just horrible.  And making, or maybe allowing, her kids to rape them like that is, horrible...  On another note this is a very well written story, and I can't wait for the next part.
However, if I was in his shoes I'd be like.
Snap one night while they wanted to do some other humilliating chore, and grab a knife from the kitchen, making sure to not be seen doing so, and hide the knife in my bed.  Then wake up in the middle of the night, and go over to Laurie when she's asleep sneaking all the way there, hoping she wont wake up.  After getting my nerves calmed I stike her neck so she can't scream, then I jump up and keep her down with my weight and mouth covered with one hand.  Then I go for my next target, her heart.  With all my might I plunge my now blood stained knife deep into her chest attemping to take out her heart.  With her out of the way, and on a high of adrenaline I go to Stephanie, using a slightly different tactic I cut her vocals out so she can't scream for help, and then I take out her head in a quick motion covering her mouth while doing so.  Finally I go to their mother, not caring if she notices me or not as I brazenly walk up to her bed and begin to repetedly stab her all over not caring if it was a vital point or not.  Then she gets up and realizes that it's her sissyboy stepson who is attacking her and attempts to take me out.  But she is furious from being attacked by her own stepson who rolls on his back when kicked, and makes a fatal flaw in thrusting with a punch.  Seeing the punch I quickly dodge to the left and slice her neck wide open keeping the knife deep in her thoat sufficiently blocking air to her lungs and she colapses to the floor dead.  I then look at the dead body on the floor I once called mommy, and strangly enough I begin to laugh maniacaly.  After a minute of laughter I come down from the adrenaline high and realize that I have finished my mission to escape the demons. Then I'd find my dad and say I got our revenge for what they did to both of us and take whatever punishment I'd recieve like a man, cause I'm not some wuss like they made me out to be.  All I wanted was a loving family, not some sadistic bitches from the depths of Hell...
That or maybe I'd call the police on rape charges... I just like the other one because it's more thrilling.

Comment by Kristen Marie on 11/04/04
Awesome story! There's not enough diaper and AR related stories on this site. I really was kept interested the entire story, well written. Please do more stories like this.

Comment by k. barrett on 10/25/04
Great, Great story but were's the next series. this story must go on.
thnak you

Comment by pat on 09/19/04
pity you did not finish the story i would loved to see how much further that you could have tahen it

Comment by babychimmy on 09/01/04
Great part #4.  Please continue!

Comment by Sissy Baby Paula on 08/29/04
A bit too fast for me! I think it was better with just one sissy who was coaxed into babyhood. Now all of a sudden it is the father too and they are both supposed to be maids.

Hugs from Sissy Baby Paula and Snowball (my toy puppy)

Comment by julie j on 08/29/04
father to what a house of dominant women well we know how the pace is set now well written amazing how much control stephanie had over her father and a bit vicious sister laurie this had to have been planned for a long time well written

Comment by Jane Hudson on 08/18/04
Daddy too now .My dear did the space ship crash  in the park and they are in Land  of the Giants. Because these girls are about the size of women from that show. Do the  boys have a fat guy carrying a gun and a bag full of nicked cash hanging around them called Fitzroy. I think its  time boys you pull the eject lever and banged out of there real fast like a SAM was up your arse big time.Or you two will be on the game pulling tricks for  a 10 year old and 13 year Brunhilder on a street corner big time.Well daddy would . Sweet sonny boy is going to be 6 until 45 if he is not careful Still fun story

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 08/18/04
At least Stephanie's "good cop" persona got stripped away in this chapter revealing the bully she really is.  These three women are acting like all the men women talk about when male bashing.  I bet they leave the seat down.

Comment by Sissy Fem Boy on 08/16/04
I loved all three parts of this story!  Please add more to it.

Comment by Jane Hudson on 08/10/04
If he like being a little miss good for him/her if not The Nut Hatch for you me laddie. He will be right of the clock barking  mad city at the end of this lot. Say hello to Jack time . My these girl either know what inside our hero or are very sick .To pick on him cause he small and weak due to illness for shame .But if he loves the idea of a big mummy making her little girl and acts  just right she/he could become mummy fav put a certain nose very out of joint.

Comment by Languish on 08/08/04
Great story. Please hurry with the next chapter.  I don't want to wait for that poor boy to snap and knife those kids... even though they're bigger than him.

Comment by bbtimmi on 08/07/04
Can't wait until # 4. Thanks, bbtimmi

Comment by Sissy Jennifer on 08/02/04
WOW!  Great story.  I'm hooked.  Excellent character and situation development.  Can't wait for the next installment.  Please keep them coming.

Comment by imb4uok on 07/30/04
I truly love your story so far.  It matches a fantasy that I had for a while, with a younger sister dominating and babying an older brother.  Why has it been so long since the last chapter?  It looks like there was a problem with part 3.

Comment by timmi on 07/23/04
Great story. Can't wait for you to continue.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 07/16/04
This boy is not too bright if he doesn't recognize "good cop, bad cop", especially now that it's "good cop" Stephanie that put him in the diaper without asking him WHY he wet.  He should take the first opportunity to get the hell out of that house and away from those two.

Comment by Brian Szylak on 07/15/04
Interesting, however, I think that it is unrealistic that a 15 year old boy can be bossed around by a ten year old and taken care of by a 13 year old. Also, the boy would most likely have the brain of someone much older.

Comment by Rachaelp30 on 07/15/04
Fantastic!!!

Comment by Sissy Baby Paula on 07/15/04
What a classic! The bad cop & good cop combination is working very well! More, pretty please!

Hugs from Sissy Baby Paula and Snowball (my toy puppy)



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