What is "upducted"?

I whole-heartedly agree with the last comment:  Poor spelling is a major distraction, and really takes away from a story.  When a reader must stop to figure out what word the author was trying to use, the thread of the story is lost.
    While we're on the subject, how the hell did they get from the plane to their present situation?  At least refer to it in passing, for pity's sake!

Quite a story.  So the young man could only have tgs before he was married heh?  With the way laws are being enforced now, I suspect this will soon be the universal case in this country.  I mean, all sex offenders are to be made public, and identified for life.  And the way, in this state, you become a sex offender is to have sex with a girl under 18, no matter if you are even younger than her.  In other words, if a girl is not a virgin reaching the age of 18, some guy is supposed to be registered for life as a sex offender, after serving 5 years in an adult prison, of course.

"Mistress" must have been a government agent.

I liked the story and was not offended the way it bounced around.  Gave it a surreallist plot.

Hope you write another.  One about the government picking boys to TG'ize as unidentified lovers to prevent girls from having sex until after they are married.

Please, Please, Please,
Learn how to spell CLOTHES not CLOTHS also BITCHES. The former is so annoying and frankly puts me off reading any more. If you cant take the time to properly proof read your work then please think again about submitting it to storysite.
You are not alone by any means and I get so frustrated at the basic errors that get posted in stories on this site.
There is a huge gap in the plot. So far (after reading part 1) there is no explanation about how they got from the Plane to being in their predicament. This is just too big a jump to handle unless there is more to be revealed in part two...