Love the story, my mother dressed me as a girl which she did for about 8 years 5 to about 13 and I loved it, she did it very lovingly after she noticed my constant infatuation with her purses and my sisters Mary Janes, but I also wanted to be kissed by her like a lover but I could never find the courage to tell her.

I look forward to reading more of this story and seeing where it goes.

Well written.  Please continue.  I'd love to read several more chapters.

Hi Cathy.
The beginning of the story was great. But the end was disgusting!

This is a VERY nice and enjoyable story up till the last paragraph of chapter two.  The Jess/Jessica in that paragraph seemed a totally different character than previously - from a loving son/daughter to a slut who would betray her mom with her mom's fiance.  And it went downhill from there

LIKE THE STORY.KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.LOOKING FORWARD FOR MORE SOON.

Not at all believable.

i thought the story was very good indeed, i agree with kay to be honest, the sexual/incest bit took teh story away from the sweetness in the first two parts.

I was expecting mom to die and jessica to take over her life and be with steve that way.

anyway, keep it up cos it was all good and turned me on!

I thought the story was very good and well written until the last paragraph when you introduced the sexual (incest) aspect.  Jessica should find a boy friend other than her new step-dad.  This would lead to a much more realistic and happier ending.

Loved first 2 pts! hOW FAR WILL HE/SHE GO? She needs a nice set of breast implants,at the least.Half expected something happening to MOM,and him taking over MOM's life/identity permanatly. Lookingg forward to more.