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New Order
by Heather Alexander

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Comment by ashley on 03/07/14
Oh come on there, where is part 2?? Its killing me here wanting to know more - - - . Great part 1

Comment by julih on 02/25/13
a real reverlation but needs to be continued

Comment by Brendy on 12/13/11
So that's the case? Quite a rveeltaoin that is.

Comment by BonnieAnne on 04/29/06
Liked the story, found it to be erotic and exciting, looking forward to part 2. Hope the sequal doesn't take to long.

Comment by Amanda on 04/25/06
Thank you for a very interesting story, now looking forward to part 2.

Comment by Sharonn on 03/28/06
Most of what is posted seems to be Part 1.  Is there ever going to be a Part 2?  Enjoyable story if a bit short on punctuation.

Comment by David Collins on 03/14/06
Well written. I'm impatient to read more.

Comment by juliej on 03/11/06
an intreseting funs story neeeds more to give it that get up&go very enjoyable

Comment by Jane Hudson on 03/09/06
Fun story

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