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A New Position
by Heather Alexander

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Comment by Ken on 01/12/14
Love this story - would like to read more and chat with author.

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Comment by julih on 02/25/13
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Comment by ashley on 09/23/10
Cant say that I know what went on here. Bad spelling and grammer et al

Comment by juliej on 01/25/06
a strange story every thing seemed to be happening at once very difficult to make a comment untill read again it was to fast but has possibilities

Comment by Donna Dee on 11/14/04
I read the comments first and now I see what they mean.  Even his boss changed her surname in the space of one day.   I wrote a story on this theme several years ago before I got into CD - I'll look it out and adapt it.  If it works out I'll post it.

Comment by Axanar on 11/13/04
I love these kinds of stories but this is a mess.  As others have pointed out it doesn't make sense.

Comment by leah on 11/13/04
I think that I can agree with the previous five or six comments. In addition I'd like to add that it seems to me you've attempted something rather tricky here. This business of explaining absolutely nothing to your reader is kind of bold and leaves us with food for thought. (Even if we don't normally choose that type diet for ourselves.)

On the other hand, Heather, where confusion in the reader is normal in this piece (as we flay about trying to set our bearings), you've hurt your own cause with the poor spelling in places and poorly chosen words that further confuse the matter. We readers shouldn't have to fight THAT hard to get to the core of your meaning.

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Comment by prue on 11/12/04
i found the non explanation of what happened rather disapointing, plus if all the men took wearing female clothing as normal, theres no angst. what about the women, do they still wear bras for support?  a lot more could be done with this story, if you tried to expand on it a little. hugs from prue

Comment by Brenna on 11/11/04
I was confused from beginning to end.  It's like the middle of this is missing.

Comment by Pippa K. on 11/11/04
Just what was in that vodka?  Hee, hee.  Okay, I don't pretend to understand it, but it was fun anyway.

Comment by Paul on 11/11/04
a little confusing how the life switch happened but other wise entertaining.

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