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Comment by Aleesha on 04/10/10
I quite liked your story as it was a bit different. You didn't mention how Dorothy was able to change the sex of both of them. Comment by Mr. Ram on 04/13/04 Do you really think that hormones have that much effect? I don't. Comment by max on 04/12/04 LOL! I guess they do each others job? Comment by Melissa on 04/11/04 Great story. Like to see 'instructions'' include some sexual items (sucking) etc. |
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