DHJFHU I really liked your article post.Really thank you! Cool.

cUKpNL There is clearly a bundle to identify about this.  I suppose you made certain nice points in features also.

FAco1q A round of applause for your article post. Cool.

BRAVO ANNDREA!
Great story, even if it is short!
You didn't need anything bad or disgusting to write a good story.
I loved it!
Kisses.
Silvia.

ok!!

the story is to short &does not go into much detail i would like a lot moore action &a lot longer story  but thankyou good start

not bad a short story could have had a bit more story and go to it
instead of it just happening

A well-done first effort, written in exactly the kind of breezy feature style that you'd expect in a campus newspaper. I don't expect that the "girls" have any openings coming up, do they? The transformation descriptions were excellent. I'm looking forward to future contributions to Story Site.

Delightful pastiche! You caught the journalistic style beautifully.
For a moment, I was afraid it was going to lapse into just another
first-person account, but you avoided that pitfall neatly.  One
minor grumble: a "gaffe" is a social blunder; the fixture you have
in mind is a gaff.  A common mistake, nothing to fuss about, but
you might as well get it right.  ("Gaff" is originally carnival
slang, referring to anything that is somehow faked.)  But a well
done story!  Hope to see more of your work here.
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--Pervy