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New Start 3
by Paul G Jutras

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Comment by Didi on 06/23/09
How beautifully tender.
Keep writing, and don't worry about your typing; in time it will come to you... it's the story that counts.

Comment by Josea on 05/11/03
I like the sentiment of many of your stories. I just wish you could find the time to polish them. Especially when they are this short.

I know, from looking at my past e-mail and post I've writen, that I often miss many errors when checking what I have just writen. That is because what I had intended to write is still fresh in my mind. And what is fresh in my mind is what I see in place of what I actually wrote. I think many people have this problem. That is why it is best to proof read the next day (or later) when what one intended to write in no longer fresh and one can look at what one actually wrote.

Please don't take my comments as a harsh insult of your work. I do like what you write and see lots of potential.

I wish you would write longer more polished stories. Or at least polish these small ones into little gems.

Keep writing.
Josea




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