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New Start 6
by Paul G Jutras

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Comment by Jane Hudson on 07/16/03
I like it my dear

Comment by Rikki on 07/16/03
This story could have used some serious proofreading.  There are many grammatical and pronoun errors.  A spell checker won't correct your choice of words and grammar.  Such as the use of "the" instead of "they" or "their".  "The" will be spelled correctly, but grammatically, it's terrible.  Before the change, pronouns shifted back and forth between the masculine and feminine.  Choose one or the other.  Even after the change, you're still referring to the main character as Paul, he, him.  I would consider this an very early draft and not a finished and polished product.



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