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The New Waitress II
by Marty S

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Comment by Silvia. on 11/05/09
It isn't a good story.
I never would talk to Sandra again!
I didn't like.
Silvia.

Comment by Susan on 11/24/02
i always dress as a woman & i work in a bar & make very good tips, not counting what i do on the side either.i bring in $200.00 a night in extra work. my wife loves it & that i dress up as a woman & we do lesbian love making &  i will bring in my black boyfriend to fuck her & make love to me

Comment by Diane Sutton on 07/10/02
Very well done and I had a good time reading this story. Hope to see more from this author.

Diane

Comment by Cute Little Thing on 07/03/02
I enjoyed this story.  It's just descriptive enough so that I was able to suspend my disbelief, not so descriptive that I got bored.  The idea of a being a 'Hooters' waitress with a sexually harassing boss sort of typifies the whole 'treat me like a horney sex object' fantasy.  The frame of the fantasy hits the limbic portion of desire exactly.  You say a couple of things I thought were kind of goofy - particularly, something like, "Since I was dressed as a woman, I wasn't gay."  Hey, its your fantasy, but if your getting turned one by penises in your mouth and ass, you might be a just bit gay - dressed as a woman or not.  

Anyway, thanks for writing this.  This was a fun story, I hope you share more of your fantasies with us.  

Cute.

Comment by suzie on 06/30/02
oh that was a good story here. i just wish i could have been in her/his shoees being able to take it at both ends,as for me dressing up as a woman & being dressed up slutty with red lips & have a big one in my mouth would be a dream cum true

Comment by Pervette on 06/28/02
I liked her remark at the very end.  Did she know?  Apparently so,
but it was never spelled out beyond that.  I felt leaving it up
in the air this way was a very good touch--so many authors would
have felt obliged to spell it out.  Altogether a nice story, nicely
told.  He *did* have fun, didn't he!
.
--Pervy



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