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Next-Door Bride
by Gingerfred Man

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Comment by Donald Smedberg on 10/15/19
A really good story.  I loved it!

Comment by jeremy abrams on 05/15/17
NOdTmW Well I definitely enjoyed reading it. This subject procured by you is very helpful for accurate planning.

Comment by Berta on 02/26/11
What a fantastic story. I'm sure many of us would love to "experience" a similar situation! Being the charmeuse satin lover and lingerie wearing closeted CD'er that I am, I wish you had shared more with us about the description and feeling of your wedding gown and other lingerie that you told us about!

Comment by ALISON MARY on 08/29/09
I don't know how you keep coming up with these stories but don't
stop. I think I need a good "milking".Thank you so much.Alison

Comment by Yvette on 03/07/08
Gingerfred Man, Your stories are just wonderful wet teases. I have to squeeeze my peeny 'tween my lets to not let myself drip i get so hot. I always make sure i'm in tight panties and wearing heels and lipstick when I read your stories. Love them. Kisses Yvette

Comment by Jørgen on 07/29/05
I too think it is the best of your stories (those I have read). It is both humorous and sexy as the rest but more intense. and I like the happy world you have created where nobody are really surprised when a boy becomes a pretty girl overnight. Except perhaps for the boy

Comment by Pervette on 04/26/04
Sorry; when I realized that the boy was of age & therefore his own
master, the story turned me off right then. It was his birthday,
after all, so he couldn't have failed to be aware of what being 18
meant. He didn't strike me as the brightest candle on the menorah,
so all in all I felt the story was going to be a dead loss. And
besides, I can't stand coercion. Entirely too much of that in the
real world. So I gave up on it.
.
Pervette

Comment by Nicole Louise on 03/12/04
Sexy story, one of your best. Every time I read one of your stories I think that there can't be another one as good or even better, but you keep exceeding my expectations. Keep on writin' ;)

Comment by Alana1960 on 06/06/03
This one surprised me...
Can you make a sissy into a girl when he doesn't realize he/she IS a sissy (and has SUCH potential)?

In Gingerfred Man's Amazing Universe you can do this...and with your parents blessing.

The fact that the neighbor planned the whole thing for a few years kinda creeped me out...why?  
It reminded me that Celine Dion's manager(and later) manager/husband started with her at (what age? 12? 13?) under 14 and then when she was old enough he married her.
I always feel that he intended this ALL along.  He just waited for her to grow up. So in my opinion he fell in love with a child.

Not unlike Mr. Clark in his pursuit of Jerry/Nicole. He bought a house and then bought a bride.  
I enjoyed the story even with the spectre of the "creepy" factor in the back of my mind. Why? well an older male teen became a gorgous woman. Oh, I loved that.

The story isn't flawed. My perception of it is based on my perceptions/connections to the Celine story.

I am making no sense because it's 12:48 AM. Read the story and enjoy it while your clitty gets hard.
Alana Brianna

Comment by J.L. Williams on 05/07/03
What a great story!!!  I have long admired your writing and this is, in my opinion, your best yet!!!  Sweet and Sexy, a great story from start to finish.

JamieLynne

Comment by Broni Marsh on 05/03/03
Hey G,

You're at the top of your game, hon. This is one of the sexiest stories yet and that's saying something! Good job, sweetie.

Broni

Comment by Paula on 05/03/03
Next Door Bride was a surprisingly wonderful story that i wasn't sure I'd enjoy as much as I did.



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