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by Vickie Tern

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Comment by joln321 on 10/31/14
Interesting, Story line. The Husband is a wimp, Wife has been a Lesbian all along?  Convinces husband He's at fault when she helped set him up. At the end, He does everything she wants and ends up in the bed of the woman that seduced his wife to set him up? nice. Most appropiate title. Loved it.  

Comment by bevivian on 08/22/14
I agree with the first comment almost 10 years ago.

I really hoped for the beginning of the transformation and then it was missing.

I also are wondering how this betrayal works in the mind of Helen as it is more extreme. The reverse or half reverse at the end hmm I don't know.

Best part for me was when I've read and to the climax of "now it starts"-feminisation, I was wondering how great this will be... anyhow partly very *nice* ;)

I'm totally into this but still sometimes I have problems with the justification of it. In this case but others too.


Comment by check this out on 11/20/13
UPA3Bu Very informative article post.Really looking forward to read more. Want more.

Comment by SassySue on 11/25/04
Although well written as usual, this was not one of Vickie's better efforts.  The twists at the end were not that unexpected, the male's motivation for going through with the changes was even weaker than usual and the whole story felt tossed off, perhaps because Vickie eliminated the whole transformation, skipping from the agreement to be converted directly to the end result a year later.  One of the enjoyments of Vickie's stories is reading about the slow transformation of the husband, often unbeknownst to him, which was missing here.  Vickie has posted a number of new stories lately which hopefully will prove more entertaining than this weak effort.

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