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Night Maid
by Valentina Michelle Smith

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Comment by Molly on 04/24/08
Somebody's been watching old Brad Pitt movies.

Comment by Dianna on 03/06/08
I have to say sugar, that I loved that ending, at last some revenge for poor forced sissy's. And it seems you have a gift for puns too.

/hug.

Great work sugar, I love stories like this. It's quite refreshing to read something that doesn't involve the femme saying: "Oh well I deserved this".


Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 10/09/07
WELL TINA, I HAVE TO ADMIT THAT YOU HAVE GIVEN US A T.G. TWIST ON A CLASSIC MONSTER. UNLIKE THE CLASSIC OR VARIETY OR THAT IN DARK SHADOWS OR BUFFY THE VAMPIRE SLAYER, YOUR DYNAMIC DUO REALLY HAS FUN AS THEY FEED AND ADMINISTER JUSTICE. TOO BAD HEY CAN'T JOIN ANGEL'S GROUP, THE ROSE'S ARMY OR M.I.B.D. ME, I AM GLAD THAT THEY ARE ON MY SIDE. SO TELL THEM TO HAVE A DRINK ON ME.

Comment by DEE on 09/26/07
THIS STORY BROUGHT A BIG SMILE TO MY FACE. I DID NOT SEE THAT ENDING
COMMING AT ALL. DELIGHTFUL TALE.

Comment by DeAnna on 09/20/06
Bloody good romp!

Comment by robin on 10/01/05
I did not know what to expect, but I was completely enchanted by this story. I hope that the future will bring more in a similar vein.
pun intended

Comment by Michelle on 08/21/05
Wow!! (sounds repetitive here, I know) but....Wow!!

Comment by Pat on 08/18/05
Wow!! I really was walloped, at how this story turned out. It was a standard fantasy, then took a wide left, and I loved it. Very well written. Thank you for sharing.

Comment by Tigger on 08/14/05
oh wow, what a wonderfully unexpected sidebranching. . .

and the final scene?!?! HOWWLLLLL!!!!

great job.

Tiggs

Comment by Diane Castle on 08/13/05
Dear Valentina,

"forced feminization in a slightly different vein"?  Bwa-ha-ha-ha!  Really, after reading your story, I re-read the intro and just cracked up.

I have enojyed your stories for some time, and I found this one refreshingly different.  Even if I read it during daylight hours.  :-)  :-)  Keep up the good work.

Love,
Diane



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