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BRGBcR Im obliged for the post.Thanks Again. Will read on...

Oh, also... this is a 14 year old kid.

Defiantly and definately are two completely different words; meaning two entirely different things.

Oh Abi - dropping your knickers on a first date! - you naughty lucky hussy. I'm quite envious. Enjoyed the story.

I love the story and would love to see our new shemale develop. I fully understand hie need to express his female side through the developemnt of his new sex needs

just had to read this one again great story

Hi Abi.
I agree with Jezzi stewart.
Silvia.

I liked your story very much and thank you for it. I couldn't understand why a 14 year old boy would want to have a homosexual relationship.

Excellent again, but still that 'defiantly' (and other typos and grammaticals), but stay with it.  You'll do fine as an author.

good story one i'v always dreamed of living thanks

hardly realistic, but i wish it was me.

Enjoyed reading all three stories.

I'm in agreement with Jezzi on this one -- that man's behavior screamed 'evil' and I was expecting a payoff in that direction.  

Not sure there's much point in mentioning this four years after you posted, but in both 'Male Waitress' and this one you used "defiantly" rather than "definitely".  The first time I wondered if you had intended it that way for some reason, but it seems clear after this second time that you didn't.  If you post it elsewhere you ought to correct that, since the words in that context are near-antonyms.

I would have liked more on the boy's homelife and background.  Parents who let their 14 year old son stay out all night without notice (He didn't seem at all worried about consequences when he got home.) and who obviously never gave him the "stranger danger" lecture (Georges behavior screamed "pedophile".) ???  A 14 year old boy with no given background of being gay knowing exactly how to position himself for George??  

Darlings,

I loved the story, really, and I do not know what person I wanted to be, the elder statement (true to my real age) or the young crdr (my dream youth)

Please send me more info on this type of stories, please

Di

Enjoyed your three stories. Especially liked the feeling of anticipation with the story about the brother.
  Thank-you.

Well done! enjoyed this very much. Your story just flowed along and kept my attention up. Good use of anticipation without the usual graphic detail so many other stories are given to. My first one to read at this site and I hope others are near as good as yours...Hal

good story

lovely story,which so could easily happen!!

Another nice story about a change in the way a boy goes from not knowing what it's like to be a girl to that of having a great time as a girl.

Diane

I loved the story, It's very good to read a story that doesnt include violence!