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Not an Alien
by Janet L. Stickney

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Comment by Mariah on 05/03/13
Another fantastic story Janet, in the times of past this was called petticoat training as it was used to control unruly boys.  Usually ordered by mothers rather than fathers, the baby clothing combined with age appropriate treatment was used with lots of public exposure to control even the most unruly of boys.  It seems most schools have a few bullies that should have a dose of what Matty got but I guess that's too much effort nowadays.

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Comment by Aleesha on 07/17/09
Another fantastic story Janet. You seem to pluck so many willing boys out of the air who are very enthusiastic about becoming knock out girls. Well done.

Comment by CATHY ANGELA DAVIS on 07/17/08
You are the best writer on this site but i thought matty's suicide attempt was wrong, you write almost as well as i do, remember on thing the story comes first than the corrections, with out the idea there is no story. I have read over one hundred stories on this site and you are the best on this site. I do have a story on another site but it was edited a little by the site, but it is good. I am trying to get publish but i write out side the box, try it sometimes and throw the guide lines away and you will see you can be more creative. but on this site you are the best. I wish I had parents like that but even though my mother was a lady she would of gone ballistic if i did that, However i was the one who helped with the cooking and shopping my sister never wanted to, and after i got older we had to clean our own dishes after we used them. so i just wish that my mind and body matched but as i told you now it is too late. keep up the good writing  maybe you will write one as great as mine. please do not be mmad at me there is no one on this site that i have seen that can write as well as you.

Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/21/07
Megan's dad keeps on forcing her to be a girl. If he had accepted Megan's needs, poor Megan would not have been born. Janet, if you continue this story, flesh out Matty's story and her journey to womanhood and Megan's acceptance of her sex as she gives herself to Greg. Truly, a story worthy of your talent. WAY TO GO GIRL!!!!!!

Comment by juliej on 07/16/07
one hell of a story well done

Comment by Kayla on 03/13/07
That was one hell of a summer. He was 13 at the begining, 17 at the end. o.o


Still damn good story.


Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 07/18/05
Wow, this story was posted in 2000 and nobody has commented on it till now - that's terrible!  This is a fine story and somewhat different from your usual in the addition of Matty.  Congrats, Janet.

I did think it could have used some editing as there were some inconsistencies:

1.  <<  Then she told me to pick out a swimsuit, one that was two piece!

"But mom!"

"Just do it Megan, or I will pick one myself."

Mom would do it too, so I walked over and looked through the racks until I found one that has what is called "Boy pants", and had a full cut top. It was red and white with blue piping. ...
...  I took the bottle, tossed it in the cart, then followed Cindy to the lingerie section. It was also where they kept the swimsuits.

"Do you have a suit Megan?"

"Um, no, and I don’t want one either."  >>

Mom made her buy a suit  and then later she tells  Cindy she doesn't have one.

2.  <<  "My sister Connie pinched me on the ass, and I smacked her up side her head. She told mom it wasn’t provoked and she believed Connie, even after I showed her the bruise Connie left. I just couldn’t face one more day in those baby clothes, so I did what you suggested. I asked them to let me dress as a normal girl my age."

"How long" Cindy asked.

"A month. I have to dress this way for a month. But Connie has to wear those baby clothes now because she lied to mom."   ...

In about twenty minutes both Matty and her mother appeared in the kitchen. "I found out that Connie had set up Matty so that we would put him in dresses. Apparently two days as a little girl made her find her tongue. I have told Matty that he can resume his life as a boy any time she wishes."  >>

If Mom didn't believe Matty, why did she make Connie wear the little girl clothes, and if she did believe Matty, why does he still have to wear girl clothes for a month?  If Connie didn't confess to setting up Matty till after two days in little girl clothes,  why was she put in little girl clothes in the first place?

3.  <<  Matty was over the edge. Anyone could see it. About a week later she tried to commit suicide and was admitted to the hospital.  >>

This seemed to come out of the blue.  You wrote Matty as being happy with the way things had turned out.



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