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Comment by CATHY ANGELA DAVIS on 07/29/08
DEAR JENNY,
I just finish part 19 I see her down fall as an alcoholic this I CAN UNDERSTAND BUT AGAIN NOT NECESSARY, BUT AFTER ALL YOU HAD HER GO THROUGH I GUESS I SHOULD NOT BE SURPRISED, BUT SHE DESERVES NOT TO HIT BOTTOM.I LIKE THE STORY BUT I SEE WHAT HAPPENS TO MOST ROCK STARS THEY CANNOT HANDLE THE PRESSURE AND TURN TO ALCOHOL AND OTHER THINGS TO GET THROUGH SHE DOES NOT NEED THIS YOU WROTE HER WITH A STRONGER CHARACTER THAN THAT. AGAIN YOU ARE A GOOD WRITER AND YOU ANSWER TO ME WAS THAT OF A REAL LADY. AND I DO NOT USE THAT WORD LIGHTLY IT MEANS SOMETHING TO ME.

Comment by CATHY ANGELA DAVIS on 07/29/08
Dear Jenny,
I still like your story and it is great, I am up to part 19 and it is great no matter what happens to CARA /NICOLA I WISH I WAS HER.

Comment by CATHY ANGELA DAVIS on 07/28/08
you seem to be very hateful about this subject, first her mother dying then the rape, neither necessary in this story i have ten more parts to go but it seems you are punishing the character for no reason, i doubt you understand the subject of men who are rally born as females, i am not saying this doesn't happen it does. but fiction does not have to be cruel.

Comment by CATHY ANGELA DAVIS on 07/28/08
I HAVE NOT FINISHED I AM UP TO PART 13 BUT I FEEL THE MOTHER DYING WAS WRONG, SHE SHOULD HAVE BEEN SAVED NO REASON I LOST MY MOTHER BECAUSE OF A LIE AND THE SYSTEM MURDERED HER, AND MY DOG, SO SINCE THIS IS FICTION THERE WAS NO NEED FOR THAT, THE REST OF THE STORY SO FAR IS FINE NOW YOU HAVE DESTROYED HER, AND IT SEEMS YOU WILL SEND HER DOWN TO THE DEEPEST DEPTH, I HOPE I AM WRONG.

Comment by Molly on 07/15/08
I find the plausibility of this story overall to be very high, with little suspension of disbelief necessary. Unfortunately, that makes the few rough spots a bit more glaring. Consider this snippet from part 19, where the main character and her manager are interviewing a candidate for the position of personal security/bodyguard:

>>Jools persisted, "That's all well and good, but what guarantees do we have that what you say is true?"

>>He gave her a long stare. "You have my word and that will have to be good enough."

Not just a wrong answer, but a ridiculous one. SOP for anyone in a profession like that is to provide a list of references. An experienced employer would ask for one; it is surprising that "Jools," the main character's manager and best friend, who is usually savvy in most things, does not know to do that. An experienced professional, on the other hand, would be prepared for the question (either a request for references from an experienced employer, or "How can I trust you?" questions from an inexperienced one), and have a referral list handy.


Comment by Me on 07/14/08
In part 16, the author writes:

>>"What are you two doing?" Jools asked suspiciously.

>>"Nothing, really," he said lamely as Jools pushed past him.

>>I followed her in and saw Jon sitting on the sofa with a games controller in his hand. He looked up at us and gave an embarrassed grin. Jools raised an eyebrow questioningly.

>>"We've got a Playstation 2 and widescreen TV in our room," he said as if by way of explanation.

>>I sighed. "You are like two little boys. You played games for the whole plane journey and here you both are at it again?"

>>Brian grinned and picked up his controller. "Got to do something to keep ourselves awake, right?"

>>Jools gave a superior smile. "I don't suppose you gentlemen would like to accompany us ladies on a shopping trip?"

Looks like our authoress has the hypocrisy bit well surrounded, with our transitioning main character enthusiastically signing on: here are the women, ridiculing the guys for entertaining themselves with what they enjoy, while preparing for yet another shopping spree when they already have closets stuffed full of clothes and shoes. Not that I don't love shopping too, I just don't sneer down my nose at other's addictions when I have so many of my own. This particular instance of "the pot calling the kettle 'black'" struck me as just a bit too blatant to be ignored. This seems to be men's role in the modern west, though, these days: to carry women's shopping out of the mall, and to carry her shadow (cf. Carl Jung) at all other times.


Comment by Bolverk on 12/08/07
Great Story !! Nice convoluted story line ,Longer Read than 'The Importance Of Being Beautiful' Is there any chance that this could be reposted as the file that I have is Corrupted after Chapter 20? Good intelligent writing ,Keep up the good work

Comment by Tommi on 10/19/07
Hi Jenny, I just want to thank you for a beautiful and fullfilling story. Your writing has filled Me with enjoyment and the Hope that you will write a sequell. Thank you for all your hard work.

Love, Tommi


Comment by Vivien on 03/10/07
This has got to be the best story I have read so far on the net! I am only at chapter thirteen so far! I just couldn't wait until I finished the story to give my comment! Reading this story is like sort of reading about ones self. It's like when reading it the main character is the reader. It's late and I am stumbling for words I am afraid so forgive me please if you will? Anyway, it is certainly a great story!

Vivien


Comment by Henry on 08/09/06
I loved reading your story no half measures i found it one of the best writen stories that ive seen on this site and hope to see more of your writing in the future.

Comment by Julie on 12/28/05
Very well written story.  You have a real talent for writing.  Have you ever heard of Grae Phillips?

Comment by Anne Marie on 08/05/05
I'm just finished reading NHM for the second time. As one who has gone through "transition" myself, I was again overwhelmed by the insight into the emotions that many of us encounter. Jenny, I'd like to thank you for your sensitive and moving story. I cant help thinking that you or someone special to you is transgendered. Being TG is at times incredibly difficult, but your story took me back through so many of those defining moments and allowed me the luxury of discreet tears, ( when Nicola was challenged ) and a wonderful feeling of joy ( when Nicola was reconciled with her Dad and Jon ). Please continue to write. I have read a lot of TG fiction and cannot think of anyone that does it better.

I hope to start writng my own story (autobiography) soon. As I write I'll surely think about you Jenny, and the wonderful work that you have done. Love and hugs to you.

Anne Marie  

Comment by Carmen on 08/02/05
Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

All of us need to have a few good stories to help us out of a rut.

This story is my pick me up.


Comment by Angela Rasch on 05/09/05
I'm just checking to see if Bobby Bookworm is still working.

Jill

Comment by Elizabeth McMurphy on 10/17/04
Jenny,

I just spent the weekend reading No Half Measures, and I just loved your story. The past two night I stayed up very late, 12:30am one night and 1am the following night as I could not stop myself from reading your wonderful story.

I am just about to re-read it, and I hope I can stop reading by 11pm so I can get some sleep to go to work tomorrow.

I am looking forward for the sequal, and pray that I don't have to wait 10 years before you post it.

Thank you very much for your wonderful story.

Love,
Elizabeth


Comment by Briar Lorenz on 09/20/04
Hi Jenny,

just read tour entire story "No half measures" again, over a wet and wild weekend, and I was emotionally drained by the experience.  TYou are a genius.  You should get this published as a book ASAP, and I do hope you will write some more.

I cannot help but believe that there is a lot of real events in it, because it is so very real.

With humble repect and admiration,

your fan,

Briar  

Comment by Laura L. on 06/15/04
Jenny,
Your story is fantastic - so much love and caring in you characters!
You must be a very loving and caring person as well.  Your attention to detail is just right to make your characters and the story seem real.  I've only read the first ten sections so far, but I'm really looking forward to the rest of the story.  Keep up the great work!
Love, Laura

Comment by anonymousOne on 05/18/04
Jenny Walker,

I generally like the new stories posted here and have never said that this or that story is the "best". In truth, the best story is the last story that I have read. So I needed a different measure of which stories I consider the best for me, and came up with the "do I want to reread it" measure. That is a round-the-corner way of saying that I have reread NHM beginning to end and still needed a substantial supply of tissues. I enjoyed it greatly the second time and found new appreciation for several parts that I read through too quickly the first time and missed the significance of what you were communicating. To tell the truth, this is not the first time I have reread parts of the story. But is is the first time that I read the entire story for the second time (make sense?).

I am definitely not one to judge which storis in the library are the "best", but I do know that NHM has an enduring quality for me that few other stories here, or elswhere, have matched.  

Thank you again for all of your hard work in bringing such a great  story to public light.  

Sincerely,

anonymousOne

Comment by jillmarie on 02/22/04
One of, if not, the best TG story I've ever read.  Thank you so much Jenny!  Please keep writing!

Comment by rosemary langton on 02/19/04
Dear Jenny ,
I have rwad many TV stories and yours was one of the best it was well written had a most unusual plot and I am glad to say had a lovely romantic finish I like my TV stories to have a happy ending ! I was also intrigued by your knowledge of the recording industry are you a singer yourself? I look forward to your next story or the second installment of NHM

Comment by Karen Danielle on 02/01/04
All i can say is wow.  what a story. the ulimate rooler coaster ride of emotions. by far the best story i have seen on this website or anywhere else.  i wanted nicola and jon to find happiness, you really had me going there about these two. i like happy ending to stories, it makes the real world more tolerable. the length of the was just perfect this was well worth the wait to read and enjoy.  keep up the excellent job of writing.  can not waited for the sequel or anything else you write. a devoted follower of our writing.

Comment by Kelly Ann Rogers on 01/29/04
Jenny,

Long, long ago, in a galaxy far, far away (FM actually), I left a nice comment after you had posted the first part of NHM.

Now, after having finished Cara Malone's whole remarkable story, I feel compelled to leave another.  

First, I must thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.  It has great scope, wonderful detail (espcecially about music), emotional highs and lows, and above all a truly admirable heart.

More than anything else, the luminous strength of Cara's heart, and the heart of her great friend Jools, give this story an emotional turbocharge that is rarely matched in this genre.

And who could read this and not wish to be able to spend more time with Cara?  What a girl!  (What an author!)

That's not to say that Cara was perfectly developed.  She's so, so good and strong, you have to have some problems with her.  Her sexuality in particular was not well explained.  It was just too pat and simple.

Second, I really must compliment you on your writing.  NHM is a great read.  It kept me engaged and eager for more the whole time.  In fact, I read the whole giant final part (as posted on FM) in essentially one sitting. Who needs a life of one's own when you can live in Cara Malone's for a while?

Finally, dear, we must thank you for adding a wonderful woman to the pantheon of TG heroines.  I'm thinking of those characters who don't just change gender and succeed, but who change us because we have had the opportunity to get to know them. Cara did that for her readers.

Thank you so much.  
 

Comment by terie on 01/19/04
dear jenny, thank you for such a fantastic story, it is easily the best i have read on this or any site. i think that the tale should be publish by mainstream publishers. you kept us in suspence until the very last, well done.  i do hope you find the inspiration to write a sequel, it will i am sure be welcomed be all your devoted fans. lots of love, terie

Comment by RobynChristine on 01/19/04
Very good girl, the thought and care you put in to this story show and is aprpreciated.

(:O) Robyn (O:)

Comment by Suzi Page on 01/17/04
"No Half Measures" is one of the best stories I have ever read, on any subject. Of the many hundreds of transgendered themed stories I have read, it is certainly the best, full stop.

Besides the great care taken in word choice and grammatical form and the impressively intricate plot told in fully laid out scenarios deep with emotional content, what is so amazing about this story is the beautiful poetry in the songs and the detail of all the places the story brings Nicola to.

Thank you, Jenny, for "No Half Measures".

Comment by Callie on 01/16/04
Wonderful story. I've just read the latest instalments with tears in my eyes and I'm glad that everything turned out right in the end.

Now before you write that sequal, how about another chapter or two after/if the news gets broken about Nicola's past.

This has been easily the best story on Storysite (sorry Crystal) and I really appreciate all the work you have put into it.;

More please

Callie

Comment by Lynna on 01/16/04
Thank you for writing this captivating story.
I truely enjoyed it, and I am eagerly looking forward to the sequel.

Comment by Sassy on 01/05/04
A very unique story. Both new with each turn of the plot and somewhat realistic. I could not stop reading till the end and waiting for more.

Comment by Jill M I on 12/31/03
Simply the best. Better than all the rest.

(Complete comments on FM.)

Love to you.

Jill M I

Comment by Geoff on 12/28/03
I downloaded this before Christmas from 'The Big Closet', but I wasn't able to finish it before rushing off to wet and windy N Wales for Christmas.  Knowing I had the next instalment lieing on my HD made for a more than usually frustrating Christmas (NOT my favourite time of year).  This latest giant posting is well up to the standard of all the others and I'm looking forward to the next (I think ultimate) episode with mixed feelings.  I want to know the end, but once I do, there'll be no more episodes to anticipate - it'll be all over.

Once again Jenny maniplates her characters on a realistic stage and we're left breathless by the ingenuity and plot devices she uses to such good effect. In a footnote, she pleads that reviewers don't reveal the ending of the current episode, but I can't resist it. The ending is ... 'Jenny! put that gun down.' aagagh, gurgle ... 'now ... I'll, never know.' sluump


Comment by Diana on 12/27/03
And once again all work around the house comes to a stop while I read the latest exploits of our heroine, Carla Malone. Vacuuming, wash the dishes, doing the laundry everything got pushed aside. Empty potato chips bag and soda cans pile up around the monitor as read of her exploits.
Our heroine life hangs by a thread?who will come to her rescue? Will Jon and her make-up or will she find another love? Will her fans find out the true story of Nicola. Stay tune for the next exciting episode of Carla Malone Rock Star.
Keep up the good work Jenny!

Comment by Fran on 12/22/03
Hi Jenny :-)
Oh please continue this wonderful story.
Hugs, Fran

Comment by ewilde on 12/22/03
Great story

It saddens me to think the Cara's father won't accept her as the talented person she is.  Thank goodness for her friends that provided a distraction on Christmas to stop her from making a big mistake.

I Can't wait to find out what happens now that her tormentor has captured her it would be great if it was Jon to the rescue to not only rescue her but their love for each other.

Comment by Starhawk on 11/15/03
Another notch to borrow a phrase.  Well done Jenny.  It was sad to have seen Cara/Nick/Nicola's mom die a few chapters ago, but it seems like he/she is bouncing back in a normal fashion (grieving, accepting, moving on) which, I thought, was tastefully done.  Then when Cara/Nick/Nicola went to the prom with Peter that was great.  Now we have things heating up with Jon, and I look forward to seeing where that will end.

Keep up the good work Jenny.

Comment by Fran on 11/14/03
What can I say Jenny!!!!!
I love this story.  :-)
I am so impatient for more, but I don't want to rush throught this story.
Hugs, Fran

Comment by Callie on 11/14/03
Another excellent instalment. You have definitely got everybody waiting for more details - which issue of the Sunday Times is the story in? LOL. This one can run and run and still remain fresh.

Callie


Comment by Liz on 10/16/03
thank you for a wonderfulstory.  Realistic characters, well crafted and dialogue which is right on.  I have read and enjoyed every word. Please find a way to keep writing about issue so near and dear to the transgendered heart.                           Liz

Comment by DAWNA on 10/15/03
FANTASTIC - both YOU and the story.  The characters are so life-like.  I had a little cry with Cara over the loss of her mother.  The characters and situations are so real I'm sure much of it must be autobiographical.  You have a wonderful knack of drawing your readers in - I was certainly moved when Cara was rejected by her father and sister.  Your creativity with the songs and the time and effort you put into them is awesome - when does the albumcome out??  Keep up the GREAT work.

Comment by Lori on 10/15/03
I love this story and I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Thank You

Comment by Starhawk on 10/14/03
Wow!  these last two parts are amazing.  This story just keeps getting better and better.  I especially love how you had Cara help Peter with his formal dance.  Cara's character is getting deeper and deeper.

Excellent work.  The bar on the pole went up a notch or two with these installments.

Starhawk

Comment by terri, somerset on 10/14/03
jenny, you are a terrific story-teller. you have us on the edge of our seats all the time. such emotion is very rarely found, you had me in tears more than once. please continue with the story, its a beautiful tale. love terri

Comment by Another Brian on 10/13/03
Jenny Walker your wonderful! The literacy and writing skills brought to Cara/Nicola's story has been well worth the wait. part 4 builds naturaly on the previous work and carries it in unexpected directions while still leaving many options open. I took my time, reading this slowly, so that I could savour the flavour of your work. This story will be an oft read classic on this site. You are setting a higher level of writting in this genre for others to follow and we are all the better for it.
Thanks again, Another Brian

Comment by RickkiB on 10/13/03
       Jenny!  You did it to me again!  You keep writing this fantastic tale, with all this emotional see-sawing back and forth and then you leave me hot, bothered, and frustrated me with a cliffhanger at the end of this segment.  I swear, you are such a tease.
       Keep up the good work.  This story is without a doubt destine to be one of the classics archeived here.  Like ever other greedy fan out there I long for more and soon.  
       Thank you for the hours of reading enjoyment you have given me so far.
     Sincerely:  RickkiB.

Comment by Karen E. Lea on 10/12/03
This story is one of the best on Storysite. Well written, with excellent characters. Please don't stop.

Love Karen.

Comment by Gianna Michelle on 10/12/03
the story keeps getting better and better i know how it feels to be the person who every one laughs at or worse like cara talked about when she went to the dance and i know how it feels to lose a parent for me though it was my father well any way befor i get my self all depressed thinking about that great story hope to see more soon

Comment by cleo on 10/11/03
If possible this story just keeps getting better and better. Every happening is so real and well thought out. I can almost see each character as they are introduced.
You're doing a super job putting this story together. I have to rank your talents on an even keel with the work of Crystal Sprite, whom I consider the most talented writer on this storysite. Waiting for more of your wonderful work. Thanks for brightening my life.

Comment by Fran on 10/11/03
Hi Jenny!
I love your story. It's GREAT!!!!!
Hugs, Fran

Comment by Thelma on 10/11/03
Not much more can be added but heres my two cents...

WOW Jenny great story you've had me crying and laughing and wishing I could buy the album when it comes out. I hope its not a long wait for the next chapters but as good as this story is its worth the wait.

Comment by Lynn on 10/11/03
Great story! Hope the next chapter comes soon. I have been left hanging over the cliff by my fingernails. Seriously, you really bring your characters to life. I enjoy the technical details of the music business. Keep Cara safe.

Lynn

Comment by anonymousOne on 10/11/03
Really fantastic. Used up quite a few tissues. Looking forward to the next.

Comment by Donna Dee on 10/11/03
What's left to say?   This is perfection, especially that song. WOW!  I feel for Cara's Dad, he has struck out in frustration at something he doesn't understand - and probably never will.  But, Jenny, you have mad every one of your readers understand how he felt - and that's no mean effort.   You really must get this published later, after you've finished it here, of course.
Hugs, Donna. xxx

Comment by Deidra on 10/11/03
WOW!! Brilliant!!

A tear-jerker and a cliff-hanger!!

Love it

Comment by Callie on 10/11/03
Wonderful story, just read the last two installments. I love the way the characters react with each other and the way new people are introduced. Just like real life. Like all good stories you leave us hoping for more..... please.


Comment by Prudence Walker on 10/10/03
WOW!!!! SHEESH i could thump you for leaving me hanging like that at the end of part 14 lol. i love this story, i cried at the death of her mom. i too lost my mom and know the feeling of loss one feels. a most exellent story in which you get caught up with the characters. this is a truely great story, one i'm jealous of (winks) hope the next chapter will be up soon huggles from prue

Comment by Lynna on 10/10/03
Thank You for a wonderful story.
I look forward to reading more episodes in this serial.
It is hard to wait for the next installment.

Comment by Geoff on 10/10/03
This story gets better and better as it continues.  This is absolutely one of my very favourite stories on Story Site.  I know nothing of the popular music scene and even less about what was once called Tin Pan Alley,  but the background is so convincing I'm sure Jenny has either done a lot of research or is involved herself.

Cara/Nicola is a beautifully rounded character with strengths, weaknesses, good points and bad.  I felt her dilemma when her father accuses her of contributing to her mother's death.  These are real problems that crop up in real families.  I like long stories primarily because I like to read about well drawn characters in well constructed plots and this one is excellent.  I demand good writing in long stories too, and this one rolls off the page so effortlessly.

I can't imagine the number of hours Jenny has spent writing and rewriting this wonderful saga,  but perhaps I can, just.  I'm struggling with another one of my own, but reading this makes me wonder if it's worth it. I can't hope to match No Half Measures.

Thank you Jenny for the pleasure I've had reading this.  I'm eagerly looking forward to the next episode.

Geoff

Comment by Deidra on 10/10/03
I haven't read the latest part yet but I know it's gonna be good!

Great story Jenny, I love the musical accompianment!!

Don't stop now!

Comment by Donna Dee on 10/02/03
  This is ridiculous - I have read every part avidly at least three times and I am desperately frustrated waiting for the next part - and the part after that.   I have imagined several variations of succeeding chapters, none of which seem right, and that only proves that us amateurs shouldn't compete with you, Jenny, the truest professional ever to write TG fiction.
I dont know who you really are, Jenny, but I love your work and I believe I love you as well.
Now if that doesn't get us the next part soon then nothing will!!!
Seriously the whole story is magnificent - please carry on on soon.
Hugs and more hugs
Donna Dee

Comment by Splinter on 09/26/03
Just wondering how much longer I can hold my breath. I do hope we hear more about Cara and her new life soon

Comment by Diana on 08/10/03
I had so many things planned to do around the house this weekend but they all got put aside when I found your story ?No Half Measures? and I just couldn?t stop reading it.
The story is professional quality with a good plot line and the character development is superb. Keep up the good work Jenny.
But, please don?t have the mother die, after all many people survive heart attacks. And please if Nicole is found out don?t have it tragic, after all there are many TS musicians out there who have not had problems. Wendy Carlos, Billy Tipton and Jennifer Leitham to name a few among many who still have successful careers.  

Comment by Amberessence on 07/28/03
Oh shit, not a CLIFFHANGER!!! That's... naughty! I love Cara, I love Jon, I love Cara & Jon. Hopefully Tanya is actually Jon's long lost sister that he brought in to make Cara jealous. Seeing as you have gotten this type of reaction out of me, I hope you realize that I think this story is brilliant!

Your technical know-how is great, without being overbearing. Your dialog is very real. You actually put the songs in the story, wow! Now if you can find a way to slip in the music it would be perfect.  

I kid you not when I say I have read hundreds and very possibly thousands of TG stories. I would place you right up there in the top five. That is saying quite a lot considering some of the great authors out there.

You continue to amaze me and I can't wait for the next part which will be out in just a few weeks, right?

Comment by cleo on 07/28/03
I just have to add my glowing praise for your wonderful story. It all seems so real. It is definitely a pleasure to read a story that is so well put together. You also know how to spell, that adds a lot of class to your work. Can't wait to see the new versions, although I'm afraid it will be a while. Keep up your wonderful work.

Comment by splinter on 07/27/03
Just finished the last installment and find that I am disappointed because now I'll have to wait for more to come.
I really am enjoying this story. Keep up the great work

Comment by Delayra on 07/21/03
Best part of this story is the real reactions of those let in on "the List"

Wonderful. A lot of it is like some of the same comments my parents/family/friends made -- except that I'm neither a beauty nor about to be a rock star, so the comments aren't tempered by the whole having other things going on for you. Heh

Comment by Fran on 06/21/03
It's a great story Jenny, thank you. I totally agree with Kristi's comments. Please continue with it.  Hugs , Fran

Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 06/05/03
Absolutely fabulous story!  A heartwarming tale with suspense and cruel cliffhangers. Your character development, Jenny, puts you in the elite class of the top authors on this or any similar site.   British phraseology is always a gas. The trueness of the friendships with Jules, Beth and Cara's sister Claire are a rock solid foundation for the whole tale.  The closeness and playfullness of these friendships makes your story come to life so completely that we can see the interactions and develop clear pictures of each character in our minds. Your story develops at just the right pace and you most cruelly leave us with a cliif hanger each time.  The cliffhanger after part four is tough, you meanie! How Cara is treated with respect and tenderness is VERY much appreciated. Even the way there is regret that Nick is being killed off in a sense is very sensitive and insightful.  All in all one of the best woven tales on any TG site anywhere anytime.  Don't worry I am not usually this effusive in my praise, but I believe in giving an author their due.   Very few mistakes in grammer or spelling.  That is pleasant. All in all after all the positive comments already about No Half Measures the best thing is to get a good cup of tea and some scones and sit for a spell and enjoy this lovely story. I certainly did.  Kristi  

Comment by Paula Mortenson on 06/01/03
I just want to add my congratulations on a well crafted story. At present I am up to part 6, it is really fascinating and compelling.

Paula

Comment by Cai on 05/30/03
Clear, concise, a throughly well written story.  I am waiting for the next installment of this wonderful story.
You, Jenny, should be ashamed of yourself, I was all set to go to bed & get a good night's rest but I had to look in on Crystal's site.
I found this latest installment, I had to read it.  I started at about 12:30Am, it is now 3:30AM.  I have to be up in 4hours.  Good thing today is Friday.
Thanks again for your wonderful story.

Comment by splinter on 05/18/03
Must tell you that I am waiting with baited breath to see how the family reacts. Love the story so far Please keep it going

Comment by Eileen Jeanne on 05/15/03
Hi Jenny... Loved your story especially for I being a musician can really relate to just about all that was written. I just about can write the ending to this beautiful story and what I really love best is that It is a Story... Not a torrid and sex filled saga of heavy sexual  moments in every or every other paragraph.

I am looking forward to snother chapter and can not wait to read it.
Again, Your writings are just magnificent.
God Bless
Eileen Jeanne Edwards

Comment by Lori on 05/12/03
I loved the story and couldn't stop reading it.  Please continue as soon as you can.  This story is one of the best I've read.

Comment by Gianna Michelle on 05/11/03
great story i didn't intend to read it all at one time but i was hooked from part one i couldn't stop reading lol hope to see more as soon as possible keep it coming PLEASE !!!!!!!

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 05/10/03
Bravo, Jenny, Bravo!  What a breath of fresh air after all the femdom/bondage/sissy sex stuff!  I was really excited upon reading Zoe's comment that this story was at Fictionmania.  I quickly zipped over there thinking I would find the whole story.  what a disappointment to find that the Fictionmania version was incomplete also.  NOT FAIR!!  Give us the rest of this wonderful story ... QUICKLY!  Oh, my, I want to BE Cara.  :-)

Comment by Kay on 05/09/03
A beautifully written story.  I was jealous of Cara.
Your writing makes me hunger for more like it.  I hate the trashy stuff.  Please write MORE>>>>MORE.

Kay (waiting in anticipation)

Comment by Heidi on 05/09/03
Wonderful story. Going for your dream can apply to anyone.

Comment by Zoe on 05/08/03
I have really enjoyed this story when it was first posted on fictionmania, and have enjoyed reading it here too.

Your characters are distinct (which is a HUGE thing on this site, namely because of the lack of such), each with their own personalities, and while occasionally they might seem a little cliched, it's only because of how sweet they are, and I am a little cynical :)

I really like how Cara's realisation of her life, and what it has meant up to this point thanks to the ability to really see it now, does not seem tacked on, but an actual realisation of a lot of repression.

I really _really_ look forward to the continuation of this soon, please do not think that there aren't those of us that will be checking just in case a new chapter is ready.

thank you,
Zoe

Comment by Abigail on 05/08/03
Beautiful & sensitive story, Jenny. You write well! Keep it up. I certainly hope that you are planning not only to finish this one but to do more. I agree with Julie's comment--this is so much better than the violent,raunchy stuff. Nice work, friend!

Comment by Julie on 05/08/03
I have found myself comparing everything I read on "storysite" with those written by Crystal and Brandy Dewinter as they seemed to me to be the epitomy of sensitivity to the emotional changes attendant to an evolving change by someone whose life was gently changed by circumstances and choices which lead to their feminization. I enjoy this type of story much more than the the more physically voilent changes forced or coerced on someone, or the fantasies which involve chemical or magically induced change which could not concievably occur. ( at least not with current technology )

With this story you have certainly entered the rarefied atmosphere of a superlative tg author. " No half measures" is a warm, loving, poignant, and totally believable story which many will enjoy all the while wishing that such remarkable changes were truly possible for themselves. I know you have put your own emotions on the line with this story and trust that you will not only continue with this story but will post additional stories in the future.

Comment by JB on 05/08/03
Fantastic story, loved every minute of it.  Please finish it very quickly,(please, please, please).

Comment by Cleo on 05/08/03
Couldn't stop until I read it all. One of the most enjoyable stories I have read on Crystal's site. Right now we are on sister Claire's doorstep, can't wait to see where this will go from there.
I hope to see more from you, not only with this story, but others.
Again, your talent is very much appreciated. Loved every word you have written.

Comment by Connor on 05/07/03
Wonderful story.  Probably the best written of all on the site.  It's such a pleasure to read a grammatically correct story in which all the words are spelled correctly.  But it's far more than that.  You have created three three-dimensional characters and embroiled them in a tightly written plot.  I'm looking forward to the next installments!

Comment by JosieP on 05/07/03
Articulate and beautifully written. Bravo, Jenny Walker!

Comment by very high heels on 05/07/03
a great story i got nothing accomplished today because i couldn't stop reading it.
 you do good with writing, your story is very well told, it has a good flowto it, and very enjoyable.
 please tell me that you plan on continuing it, because it really does need an ending. keep up the good work, i look forward to more



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