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No Longer Needed
by Jennifer Allison

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Comment by Rachel Rae on 05/14/04
It is an entirely new concept for a storyline for me.  But I guess when one is as new to all this as I am, everything is new.  I'm not much on fantasy conversions, I much prefer realistic, and attainable situations.  But nevertheless, I look forward to your writings.

Comment by NDC on 08/02/03
Hmmm this story is along the lines of the old Brit TV show The Prisoner. Insted of putting the retired spies on an escapeproof island you change their sex and turn them into babies. I guess their thinking is that before they (the old spies) are old enough to get back at the government that betrayed them they will have eather gone crazy,killed themselfs or accepted their new life. I think a interesting story would be about a group of them getting togater and working to stop this unjust treatment.

Comment by chris lyons on 07/20/03
Hey Jenniffer.

I think your story rocks. But your charecter needs help from others from your other stories if he/she she wants to get revenge or if some one from her past comes back to get her and the enemy knows who she is

P.S. You are a hella tight auther

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 05/16/03
Truely a horror story!  Welcome to Amerika where no good deed goes unpunished; what a field day the militia and posse never-trust-the-government guys would have with this one.  A government not just amoral, but sadistic.  Identity death would have been amoral; leaving an adult man alive in the body of a one month old baby girl is truely sadistic.  Add to that that the parents "she's" placed with are kinky and into water sports.

UNLESS, and I hope this is the case, the adult male persona and memories were suppressed, not destroyed, and have surfaced in the now grown up woman who is writing the story.  That leaves this open for a good-guys-get-revenge sequel.  

Comment by Valentina Michelle Smith on 05/16/03
Cute, but...
In corresponding with another author, I commented that I have often fantasized about a life do-over as a girl instead of a boy.  This story kinda sorta touches on this.  What bothers me is that the do-over in this case is not voluntary.  Neither is it a punishment for some serious transgression or bad karma.  The protagonist's only crime was true and faithful service to his country for twenty years.  Hardly a fitting recompense.
Otherwise, I enjoyed it

Comment by theclaw on 05/16/03
Good idea but way too short of a story. Please continue someday if possible

Comment by Tom on 05/16/03
very interesting premise, sadistic, but interesting. I was left kind of hanging though, there is a whole bunch of potential in this story and I hope old spies can live to fight another day. Perhaps a chance encounter with the old Medallion? that would put the Director in her place.



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