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by Daedalus

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Comment by thruholewizard on 09/23/14
sweet sentimental story ,I loved it !Stephen said it best and I agree with him. I hope I find many more stories written like this .I really like the sweet sentimental stories the most .

Comment by Silvia. on 08/31/11
Karen J. wrote very well in 03/29/09.
I agree with her!

Comment by Stephen on 08/25/11
 
    I love  these sentimental stories , wonderfully written <I thought < with beautiful descriptiion and love  in the words . I hope  you write more sentimental pieces like  this . Blessed  Be ! Namaste !

Comment by eric on 06/27/10
wish that was me

Comment by Karen J. on 03/29/09
Further comment.  I was rereading this and noticed something.  At the very first Neera says: "A lesbian, if you prefer."  But later on there is this: "And you’ll enjoy having dicks put into you rather more than you have ever enjoyed putting your dicky into others."

So, Neera has mislead Nicky.  She even says as much.

"Irrevocably?!..."

"Well, yes! Oh, not because I’d refuse to turn you back, silly... Because you won’t want me to. It’s in the nature of the spell that you will love being what you are being turned into, because you are being turned into what you will love being - see?"

The mind control is very neatly introduced, but it is there, so Nick never really had any choice.  She made sure each step included alterations to his brain.  "Curiously enough, these fantasies of being transformed (particularly into a beautiful, sexy woman) hadn’t surfaced until after I met Neera."

But what about her existence?  Neera made it clear earlier that Nick's ID was unchanged.  So Nicole has no legal existence, no birth certificate, no drivers license, no job, no nothing.  What happens to Nicole if/when Neera gets tired of her, or decides she wants a hetero relationship.  Will Nicole get passed off to some guy while Neera plays with a new boytoy?


 


Comment by Paula on 03/24/09
magically sweet story

Comment by Karen J. on 03/23/09
Okay, I'm confused.  How can a story that was just posted have comments from several years ago?

It is a good story and I enjoyed it.  Thanks


Comment by Regina on 03/16/09
Wonderful story I hope I dream it tonight and don't wake up.

Comment by Amy Sadler on 08/09/08
Awell concieved and constructed story, very powerful, in both the depth of discription and pace of story telling.  Excellent work.

Comment by jeannette on 11/09/07
I have the same comments as Mandee... Great story. And, he/she gets the BEST of both worlds!

Comment by Mandee on 02/22/05
Truly, truly, a male to female T-girls dream story.  And the lovely thrill is that the original sexual orientation for girlfriend doesn't leave, and unlike real life- neither does she.  So our guy winds up with both his woman, and her womanhood as well  What a lucky bastard indeed!
Thanks for the wonderful writing and story line.
Mandee

Comment by Renegade on 10/11/04
A very sensual story... I enjoyued it.  

Renegade

Comment by Bridgette Georgie on 10/01/04
Wonderful. Exquisite.

Comment by shy surfer on 09/23/03
A wonderfull bed time story. Thanks.XXX

Comment by Donna Dee on 01/18/03
 Perfection!   Subtle and yet exciting - a dream come true, lucky bastard.

Comment by Stefan on 09/27/02
A wonderful story. If only!

Comment by aine fea on 10/26/01
Fantastic!!!Very well done!!It's very true...be careful what you ask for ... you might get it!
Aine :)

Comment by Mary Ann on 03/29/01
Wish it was me !!!!!!!!

Comment by Francesca Barrie on 02/16/01
Oh what a delicious tale! The stuff of dreams er well, my dreams anyway. I loved it.Thanks.

Comment by Jackie on 02/11/01
Liked it!  superb!   The kind of story I look forbut seldom find.

Comment by Paula Jutras on 02/11/01
It's like forget The Wizard lead me to this make over artist to become a real girl. excellent tale



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