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Not in a Million Years
by Conan Johnson

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Comment by Silvia. on 08/19/11
Another disgusting story.

Comment by ashley on 07/26/10
Another nice one. Too bad he couldn't get back with his ex and she really take control!!! But then , thats another story??

Comment by juliej on 09/20/09
good story but to short a lot more could be expaned on

Comment by Priscilla Ann on 11/08/07
They say 'let the punishment fit the crime.' This punishment may have gone a bit beyond the crime -- but that is for some other conversation. Hence, the punishment is marvelous and the revenge delicious. And I agree with Julie J, it could've been a bit longer in terms of what happened when the poor dear tried to escape. I could just imagine Mistress Joan's wrath. Overall, a great story.

Comment by dee on 10/05/07
very well done, but i don't think the punishment fit the crime and
i do believe that the injusticed should be revenged.

Comment by juliej on 06/02/07
i stand by my previous comments well done

Comment by juliej on 05/15/04
sweet revenge what a unlucky guy oy lucky as the case may be i would have liked the story to be a lot longer and more details of how he tried and nearly got away how he was punished by joan and where he slept at night etc but a good begining well done



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