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Comment by Ademir on 10/23/12
I got my navel pierced at 18 years old. Had it for 4 years now. I have never once reegrtted it. On that same note, I researched all of the local studios and types of metal before having it done. It cost me $80 altogether. I also was very religious about caring for my piercing. More often than not, people don't follow the steps that the piercing artist will advise. So then it gets all infected, disgusting, unhealthy, and ends up falling out even if it's done professionally. Make sure you clean it with water, soap, and then soak it in sea salt water. But make sure it's not iodized. I also have 1 tattoo and 3 ear piercings. Never had an infection or problems with any of my body modification. Just be careful to pick something that you can remove yourself If it needs to be removed surgically (like some of the strange and intense piercing styles out there) to be honest those seem to be too complex and not worth the health risk. Same with genital piercings. Ouch! Comment by Barbara Sheldon on 05/14/08 This a lovely and charming story. Well written, good character development and with a menacing sub-plot that is the mirror-image of the main story line. And Mrs. Edwards is a mother that every boy would love to have! Comment by Rone on 04/12/06 Well done lovely story ..... Why did you stop there ?? Comment by julie j on 05/26/05 a sweet little story well thought out&written his mather played along as well &even after trick or treat he wanted to stay the same well done Comment by Susan Pauline Bauer on 06/09/04 Dear Donna, Comment by Happy Reader on 03/26/03 This is such a well written, entertaining story that I did not want it to end. Your boy-girl relationships are dreams come true. I hope we are able to read more of your excellent work! Comment by Mike on 08/13/02 I feel that every TV & CD still in the closet can learn a lesson in simple courage from Ralphie--"To Thine Own Self Be True".This one gets an A+ for that. Comment by TinaTvUk on 10/31/01 More please!! Sweet Heaven Comment by Amanda on 10/30/01 Gentle story well developed, I feared that there may be unpleasantness but the girls brought their men under control! I do wish I could have been the central character |
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