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Now and Forever
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Korie (right now that is!) on 12/18/10
You are very arogant towards men. Why is that? We are not all bad, only some guys are.

Comment by Aleesha on 05/28/10
Thanks for this story, it was great.

Comment by Peter on 04/27/09
Your stories are compulsive - if only to find out if you ever create women who don't have large breasts, pretty faces, slim waists and an obsession with clothes, makeup and sex. Couldn't you occasionally turn your men into real women ? Just occasionally, as in "period, period, period" you touch on how real people might react to a male suddenly finding himself in a female body but you could do so much more to explore the real issues.

Comment by Tina Michelle Smith on 06/02/04
Jennifer, this was a very sweet and enjoyable story.  I have only one question.  Why an "X" rating?  This really is not the sort of story one would expect to be rated X.

Comment by Early June on 06/01/04
As a connoiseur of J. White's stories, I must say this is the sweetest one you have posted, in a long while.  A thoroughly enjoyable and fun read.  Your characters act on their own, even though they are being pushed along by events out of their control. Thank you for the nice story. You  developed the plot smoothly.  And it has the classic good editing.

Comment by oturus on 05/30/04
I just wanted to say how much of a HUGE fan I am of Jennifer's stories!  They have a way of really drawing me in and feeling what the characters feel.  I especially love the mental/personality transformations where the character WANTS and LOVES being a girl and gives into the feminine urges and desires she feels.  Thanks for the wonderful stories and PLEASE keep up the great work!  

Comment by Sissy Baby Paula on 05/30/04
A superb story! Magical transformations can be a bit dull for me - just changes and fear of getting stuck and what not... But this story makes one smile and laugh at the twist and turns. And who wouldn't want to grow to be a lady?

Hugs from Sissy Baby Paula and Snowball (my toy puppy)



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