in my humble opinion, sometimes at the end of such a story I would wish the betrayed would just take out a gun and ...

I'm honestly turned on by feminization, or forced feminisation. But I also believe in "Karma" so...

(Of course the gun is an exaggeration)

(I'm aware of the sadly dead site but hey somebody might read it ^^ )

I just re-read this story (at my age you start forgetting what you read years ago:) and found it more satisfying this time around.  This story has a real Vickie Tern-like feel that I enjoyed immensely.

To Bruce and Jezzi: although Sherrie was unnecessarily cruel, it was probably cheaper than a divorce.  And, of course, it is "forced fem FICTION" so part of the appeal is that the transfomee is humiliated, while we, the readers, know that it is FICTION and not reality.

Thanks again to Jean for writing and posting it.

SS

got to another reason they did this to him a simple divorce would have been easier

Very interesting piece of revenge. Poor Lisa was set up beautifully and is certainly in for some interesting comeuppance at the girl's school. A follow up focusing on Lisa's training at school would be quite appreciated. Perhaps . . .

i stand by my previous comments great story more please

great story but i feel it would be much better if you added another part to this story like at the school&training etc  well written

I loved your story, and I don't expect stories on this site to be like the 6 O'clock new's. Your story was very creative and great fun to read. Thanks!

I agreed with Julie's comments, but I liked the story anyway.  Keep up the good work.

SS

The setup was a little weak. In most places it is neither pedophilic nor illegal for a 21-year-old to have consensual sex with a 17-year-old. Before consenting to the transformation, Scott (Lisa) should have consulted a criminal lawyer. Of course, then we wouldn't have had a story.

Great story, Please continue it with a Part 2 of Lisa's School days that would be fantastic as the Hormones slowly feminize her brain to match her body.

Gee whiz! I assume Lisa had a full operation? All those yuccky things removed. He and whatshername should be happy lessies together.

I'd have killed the three of them and to hell with the consequences, but since she didn't, what about the people at Lisa's work?  Could she contact them for help?  I do hope Lisa ends up loving being a woman, but I do so want her to get revenge!  I hate it when the bad guys win.  I can see that in reality on the news.

I LOVE this, just like I love ALL YOUR STORIES!  You have a sequel here, the adult having to revert to teen girldom.  It's the ultimate demotion! Send him to school and have him take business ed courses, but not for an MBA but to clerk for the secretaries of the MBA's, so she can someday become a clerical worker herself.

I absolutely loved this story and think it is one of your best stories yet.  I really hope you continue to tell tales of Terry and Lisa.  I'm keeping my legs crossed hoping you do. Thanks for such a great story.

reminds me of when my wife caught me dressed as a woman. she said i looked cute. she had me change clothes & put on a sexy outfit & she got herself all dolled up & we went to a bar where we met 2 guys & took them home with us & the one guy had me suck his cock.that was over 3 years ago. me & him are together now as husband & wife. he has gotten me breast implants. he is a very charming black man. i always wondered what white woman saw in black guys & now i know. my man is so sexy & knows how to treat me right.