All right, here I go again...doesn't this sound like a reworking of the plot of an episode of the Disney Channel's "Sweet Life of Zack and Cody"?  

Amaizing story, continue please!
Silvia.

Thanks for a story so in keeping with such a major fantasy of mine. I love dressing and to be put into a position where I am forced to appear in public undetected as a member of the fair sex would be a fantastic thrill. Thanks again.

Cute story!

This can't be the end please continue his adventures.

Awe, part 3's not really the end, is it?

Solid ending.

tell me that this is not the end please great story

The end? No way, tell me it isn't so!
Great story I loved it! Good writing and I couldn't wait to see more posted. Now I'm sad it has ended...Sniff, sniff. :(

Huggles Colin
Angel

I can hardly wait for the continuation of this story.  I do hope there are plans for more.  Thank you very much for sharing.  I will look forward to the following chapters of this story.

I am still chuckling.  This is well written and a lot of fun.  I hope it continues as the "intro" is promising.  Praise from as skilled a writer as Jennifer White is high praise indeed.  Thank you for sharing this with us.

Short but intense. Fast action and great fun. Thanks

i will be delighted to read the next installment this is a great story so far its going to be intresting hoe he gets out of it brilliant getting dressed again as a school girl to leave will be intresting next part please well done

another really good start to this story it will be very interesting to see how this pans out well done

A really good start, a very good idea i look forward to reading more and i'd love to see what happens next ....? as a fellow author to this site i wish i had thought of the idea lol. All the best for all the future stories.

 Very good start  ... this has a good plot and good story line.
the wedding dress sounds good  put a lot of detail on the transformation and have him winng a prize , Mom could come and sit in the autotryum to see the older sister and reconize him ..

a lot potential and it could be a lot of fun ..

Keep up the good work  ....  Rone

Hi Colin,
        What a great first part. I look forward to the next part.

Luv Rose

Very good start. Eagerly looking forward to your next installment!

So far so good,Please continue.

A very good story (Although a little brief).
It is very believable, which makes the story more enjoyable. May I be the first to plead, CONTINUE this story PLEASE!!
It begs a sequel or at least a second part, you could even make it into several parts!!