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Now You Are A Woman
by Jennifer White

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Comment by juliej on 07/28/07
what a way to go it feels like a set up but im not sure afterall he was playing around and had been caught its a heck of a choice and he fell into it still if you play the field and get caught its your faultbut he had a choice divoice or become a woman not everyone has that choice a brilliant story which could be expanded upon well done

Comment by suna on 10/31/06
A fun read. The scene of discovering why the relationship would be changing was great. In my mind I saw the shock on his face in such a subnmissive position. Tho in the light of morning he may wonder exactly why he agreed and call his lawyer.

Thank you for the view from your mind's eye.


Comment by will on 10/03/06
It great how Allison could just pushing him a little farther each time.  Until she had complete control of him and his masculinity.  A fun read!

Comment by Pam on 07/22/06
Wow, only to find such a wonderful, woman to manage my life

Pam




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