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Nurse Karrie
by Jennifer White

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Comment by John in Wauwatosa on 07/15/09
Normal I don't like your stories.

Don't get me wrong, you write well and tell enguaging tales. It's just anyone abusing power pushes my button be they male or female.

These are fiction, almost fables, so I shouldn't complain. This is a genera within TG fiction and you do it well.

I LIKED this one. Thought the transformations are unwanted, *forced*, the men remember who they were and are redeemed by the transformations.

That is something I am fond of, redemption.

Even the harased, and justifiably pissed off nurse who called down the curse, or is it a blessing, feels some remorse for whst see did. I like that alot.

The men changed *deserved* it to a large extent and got better lives for it.

Bravo for a happy, or mostly so, ending.

I may often disagree with your stories outcomes but I applaud your creativity.

John in Wauwatosa


Comment by Chelsea on 02/16/08
I liked this story because the men were shown a lesson and were even given a chance to return if they wanted. Those men were horrible, bigoted and evil. They way they picketed that poor clinic was horrid. Now granted I myself am not entirely sure how i feel about abortion, however I believe a woman has a right to be able to decide what happens to her body. I know... if some miracle ever did happen to allow me to become pregnant, I'd want the choice to keep the child, I wouldn't get and abortion, because I've wanted to conceive a child since I was 10 years old.

Comment by life on 07/16/03
I'm sorry Catherine - but you are closeminded.

Comment by Allie on 07/16/03
I liked the story but I did have one little problem with it. You have all the men there being turned into women. But what about the men who are pro-choice and where there because of their jobs? I did like that they were give a choice at the end.

Goddess guide us.
Allie

Comment by Catherine on 07/16/03
I love most of your stories and this is a good one too. I must disagree with the premise that the pro-life people who picket clinics are bad people. The ones that attack others or kill should be punished but they are entitled to have their say and to try to persuade others of that point of view or does that only apply to the other side. I am a TV myself but most definitely pro-life and I resent being painted as "close minded" because I believe it is wrong to take an innocent life.

Comment by paula on 07/15/03
another lovely story dear. Great ending



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