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The Odd Girl Out
by Dawn DeWinter

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Comment by Pixie on 03/07/11
Umm, yes well, I must be a dumb blond Essex girl bimbo.
*WHERE'S* the story?
  Pixie xx
Comment by Geoff on 11/22/03
Over here (UK), US style Hallowe'en is pretty new and when I was a nipper it passed by totally unnoticed, so everything I know about this strange custom is what I've picked up on the TG fiction sites.  However, I rather like this little story. I'm not sure, but I think the whole point is Dawn's wistful reflections that this boy was able to claim 'to be a girl too', without attracting the approbium that would have been typical when Dawn was a similar age.  The curly hair comment demonstrates that irony is not dead in 21st century USA, as is often claimed.

If I've got hold of the wrong end of the stick entirely - please don't tell me :o).  It takes a lot for me to bother reading a fragment like this - and the author's name at the top is the biggest spur.

Geoff
Comment by Terri on 11/22/03
     Sorry, but I totally missed the point of the story.
Comment by Jaqueline Spratte on 11/22/03
i also didnt quite understand the story
Comment by Annie O on 11/22/03
I loved it -- "hell being a girl with hair as curly as yours."
 Wonder which girl gets him into her prom dress first.
Comment by prue on 11/22/03
huh??? i must be blonde i didnt get it at all.


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