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Office Exchange
by Ann O'Nonymous

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Comment by thisisme on 06/05/13
I don't think they deserve life in prison... but I do think they are culpable. The one feminine trait that comes through loud and clear in these stories that I actually agree with is manipulative. I think women can be extremely manipulative.

Comment by thisisme on 05/14/13
This story is a bit pie in the sky. You don't reduce stress by throwing a person into a bear pit. So they keep their motives secret and still map out a course that humiliates and denegrates a person who is accustomed to being an a type personality?

Comment by ashley on 04/01/12
what a lovely scenario . Bet lots of people would love to be Janice ??

Comment by Silvia. on 09/11/10
Aunt Vera, and Susan should get life in prison, for what they did with Janice.
Janice was betrayed!
Silvia.

Comment by ashley on 04/27/10
another great story

Comment by DEE on 09/18/07
AGAIN, YOUR LIGHTER SIDE IS EXTREMELY ENTERTAINING. I REALLY DID
ENJOY THE STORY ESPECIALLY THE LITTLT TWIST AT THE END.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 06/20/06
I just reread this after almost 5 years and while I still enjoyed it and stand by my 2001 comments, I came up with some questions.

1)  I assume that for his Aunt to resort to such a drastic plan, his stress levels were so high that he was VERY close to a life threatening heart attack .  If so, did they have medical backup in what I would consider the very likely case that the initial forced feminization during "the weekend from Hell or entering the office enfemme for the first time would raise those already dangerously high stress levels enough tp push him over the edge?

2)  Did Auntie and Susan have a backup plan in case he did not take the path they wanted/expected him to take after they revealed their "mistake", and either he  a.) decided to return to being James and in anger shunned them for feminizing him in the first place or quit saying he never wanted to see them again   OR  b.) decided he wanted to go all the way through SRS to actually be a woman (I gather Susan was not a lesbian.)

Comment by julie j on 03/04/05
this was very well written and intresting this again i feel was to short more please

Comment by Jill on 08/31/03
More Please

Comment by Night Wolf on 03/31/03
This Was very well written! I really enjoyed it and agree that you should try to write more like it!

Comment by Jill M I on 06/19/02
How can this be?

A delightful story based on love and affection that involves cross dressing?

Hey!  I've got a pretty good life.  Sometimes things just seem to work out okay, even for a TV.  Sometimes fiction does imitate life.

The only criticism is ...our hero doesn't seem to understand how much Vera loves him.  It would be even better if he felt the love all around him... including his uber-boss.

Comment by Anthia on 06/18/02
I am really pleased I read this storey. It does not stretch the immagination too much as it has a touch of realism to it. Please write more on the same lines.

Comment by Diane Sutton on 10/17/01
A sort of short story for me to read but, it was a very good one with a nice ending that was well thought out.

Comment by GFriday on 09/16/01
Wonderful, and you caught the rarely-seen angle that She LIKES being a secretary. Please, Annie! Do some more office femdom, maybe something a little different, like a bet between boss and secretary that they can't do each other's jobs that winds up a permanent role (and clothing) reversal, or a boss blackmailed by his entire clerical staff into the same sort of thing.  It'd be nice to see it really brought to a high point when he walks in, totally feminized and the reaction from the secretaries to the new "girl" and his feelings.

Comment by "Ruth" on 07/29/01
At last a love story. And I loved it too!

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 07/26/01
Now this one I really liked; I'm just a sucker for a happy ending.  I assume he gets to drop the curtseying and other subservient behavior and wear normal office attire.  You write well on either the dark or light side.

Comment by Axanar on 07/25/01
Congratulations Annie! This is my favorite type of story, the male executive who for better or worse is forced by coercion or deception to take the role of secretary and take it the entire way, working for a boss who was once his secretary.  These sorts of twists and turns have been bandied about at various times but you put them together masterfully including the delightful twist of him preferring the secretarial and feminized role, saving his health yet still finding a female soulmate instead of the usual X-rated stuff.  There are so many potential variations on this theme, and many talk about these stories but few write them.  Please do more along this line.  

Comment by Nellie D on 07/25/01
A nice variation on the forced to dress theme. The ending has a twist that isn't usually thought of in this type story. And the decission he makes is for the right reasons not forced upon him.

Another very good story, Ann!

Comment by ldyndskies on 07/25/01
A terrific twist on the end of the story. It falls in with comments many CD's make about how they feel when they dress. It's also a nice juxtaposition to "A Little Knowledge."



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