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Oh Baby
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 01/04/04
<<  "I wish you both were women, so that you'd understand" said Sandra. "I wish you had hungry babies of your own.">>  

Sandra did not get her wish.  how can Charlie and Dennis understand when they no longer exist?  Hillary in effect executed them, although the death was slow.  If understanding on the part of the two men was what was wanted, why make them into different people mentally?

Comment by Kim West on 01/03/04
This was actually a rather cute little story. I do think it is perfectly normal for a woman to breast feed her child. I personally would have picked a better restaurant to eat at if the restroom was that dirty. I mean, if an establishment can't keep that clean, what does that say for the quality of the food they are serving?  

The two men defiantly over stepped their bounds, and I think if they had forced the issue with arrest they might have ended up in jail themselves, but that would not make a very good tg story would it?  I enjoyed how these two men became mother and daughter, and also think it was pretty neat to have the mother end up becoming a waitress at Hooters.

Also, one more note, I am glad you didn't force the new mother to become a mindless sex slave to the very first man she met, and have that man instantly make her pregnant. That seems to be a recurring theme in many of your stories. I am not criticizing; forced feminization seems to be your specialty, and there is certainly nothing wrong with that. I wish you much success.

Kim.  



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