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Oh Donna
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Comment by Silvia. on 09/16/11
Simply disgusting! Comment by juliej on 03/07/08 as per previous comments Comment by juliej on 12/10/06 a sweet story of getting a boyfreind to act more towards her brilliant set up a bit of everything well donethis my 2nd reading Comment by julie j on 11/01/04 i think this story was wonderfull really well written&explained a nice sweet story welldone Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 02/19/04 I liked this story. It really is sweet and sentimental. Travis turned out to be a good guy after all. Comment by Eric on 02/18/04 Really good job, taking the story in an unexpected direction. Comment by SassySue on 02/16/04 Very nice story, well told. I disagree with the Sssi Rikki. I think he did learn his lesson and was responsive to Donna's needs. I'm just disappointed dressing games didn't become a regular part of their love life. Comment by Sissi Rikki on 02/15/04 I was really illy loving the story butt I was disapointed in the ending. I was hoping her girlfriends would surprise party his butt with camers rolling.Then if they were happily married a year later he might be a decent hubby. She had him and now he probably plays golf every weekend instead of cleaning the house and having her dinner redy when she comes home from the country club, poor girl. X, Sissi Riki |
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