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Oh No....The Fish !
by X. S. Sillke

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Comment by Molly on 03/11/08
There's a recurrent theme in much of TG fiction: people being forced, coerced, manipulated, or otherwise pressured into something for which they were not ready, or never wanted to do at all-- people being used, to satisfy the needs or whims of someone else. This is another "forced" story; the only difference between this one and the "forced fem" stories that make up a huge sub-genre in TG fiction is the direction in which the main character is forced. In this case, someone who is exploring his sexuality is caught by his gay uncle, and the consequences are that he'd better do what his uncle wants, or risk being "outed" to his family (the threat is never stated, but is always there by implication, which makes it even more insidious). If you delight in reading about someone feeling used (which in fact he is), humiliated, and all the rest of it, this story is for you. Forced *anything* stories tap too much into my own traumas and sensibilities, so I bailed after part 1.

Comment by Calv on 05/15/03
Why cant I get invited to parties like that? Like the story, and it's not often I laugh when reading these stories. Looking forward to the next instalment.

Comment by Gloria on 04/21/03
I got all caught up in this story. Loved the teasing banter.

Comment by BrandiLynn on 04/21/03
What a wonderful story I can't wait to see what happens at the party

Comment by Broni on 04/20/03
This is such a lovely story. I am so happy to see a story that treats the gay side of transvestism with such honesty. I can't wait for the next installment.

Broni

Comment by Pervette on 04/19/03
This is shaping up to be a very nice story. Caught with conse-
quences can mean many things; here the consequences are turning out
to be lots of fun for all concerned.  I'll be looking forward to
more...er...consequences.

--Pervy



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