as per my previous comments more please

great story thankyou

I enjoyed the story and the ending was lovely.

The reason for punishment - unfateful by simply looking pictures in the net - is not very realistic. And he really surrendered too easily. But then not many "bad boy to good girl" stories are realistic. I sometimes feel that they are stories to help us to accept our feminity within a male body - an outside force makes it acceptable to throw away maleness.

Hugs,
Sissy Baby Paula and Snowball (my toy puppy)

great story devious women well written more please

must agree with simon on this one  the male character was so weak and just enjoyed porn..and you know what really happens to women who use sex as a weapon..?

You use the same formula, and the same faults, in all your blackmail stories, and it's a shame, because they make an otherwise good story annoying to read.

The scene where Amber catches him in front of his porn is ridiculous.  Would anyone give in that easily?  Would anyone forget that in a he says/she says situation, you can lie?  Would anyone just take the other person's word for what their options are?  I almost stopped reading when Amber said "since she'll have good grounds for the divorce."  Seriously, how is looking at porn "good grounds for divorce?"

You constantly make your male characters too weak, and you give your non-magical female characters too much weight.  Your "Great One" story is better, in that it gives its female antagonist a *reason* for being so persuasive in her mind control, but so far as you've told us, Amber is just a normal person, and is getting away with a whole lot more than she should.

You're a good writer, but you need to catch these details, or else your stories won't be believeable.

What a gorgeous story!! I really wish that would happen to me! I want to be forced into becoming a woman. Oh well, one can dream!

Love n Kisses,

Monica xxx

I really, really liked the ending to this one.  It takes a real man to admit he is wrong and take responsibility for his actions even if it means becoming a woman, and he did just that. He also showed real love for Samantha in that he would become her girlfriend instead of her husband if it meant staying with her, and it also showed a positive attitude that he would not let being her girlfriend and secretary be just a duty, but would do "her" best to enjoy being a woman and EARN Samantha and Amber's friendship (I would have gone for a pink suit instead of the blue pinstripe though  :-).  
On Amber and Samantha's part, it's clear that they were out for reformation, not punishment - punishment would have been to make him BE a porn star like Tiffany; they clearly are giving Tiff the chance to be a friend and a lady.

Whether they make me mad or give me warm fuzzies like this one, I always enjoy your stories Jennifer.