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Comment by this is me on 07/28/12
I'm glad you are getting the good reviews for this one that you are. It really does go in a different direction than the ickiness of the standard tranny fetish. As one person put it it is a romantic love story and I might add it is an expression of mutual trust and respect. Things that truely make a relationship worth the effort. Comment by this is me on 07/28/12 I'm not even one of the characters and that kind of scared me when she started talking about removing her boobs and bulking up. What that would have done is clashed their two fantasies. It would have made their marriage inviable. Comment by Lee lee on 01/07/08 OH you had me going there for a moment. I thought, "Oh no not another male bashing male hating story of unleashed nastiness." I almost stopped reading when I found out they had separate rooms and thought a couple of more paragraphs and I am 'outta here' but then I became curious about her change. No, there is more to this. She was too nice up until now. Phew, clad I finished it. A true love story with each allowing the other to find their happiness. I was so happy that Brenda got to keep her right to decide. Thanks for a story well told....had me guessing on this one! Comment by Paul on 11/20/07 Dear Jennifer, Comment by Pat on 11/04/07 Jennifer, Comment by DebbieK2 on 10/23/07 Fantastic! Comment by SassySue on 10/22/07 What a wonderful erotic, sexy story; well written as usual. It's nice to see a story where a husband and wife can both indulge their respective fantasies to their mutual benefit. |
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