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One Slip
by Jennifer White

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Comment by this is me on 07/28/12
I'm glad you are getting the good reviews for this one that you are. It really does go in a different direction than the ickiness of the standard tranny fetish. As one person put it it is a romantic love story and I might add it is an expression of mutual trust and respect. Things that truely make a relationship worth the effort.

Comment by this is me on 07/28/12
I'm not even one of the characters and that kind of scared me when she started talking about removing her boobs and bulking up. What that would have done is clashed their two fantasies. It would have made their marriage inviable.

Comment by Lee lee on 01/07/08
OH you had me going there for a  moment. I thought, "Oh no not another male  bashing male hating story of unleashed nastiness."  I almost stopped reading when I found out they had separate rooms and thought a couple of more paragraphs and I am 'outta here'  but then I became curious about her change.  No, there is more to this. She was too nice up until now. Phew, clad I finished it. A true love story with each allowing the other to find their happiness.  I was so happy that Brenda got to keep her right to decide.  Thanks for a story well told....had me guessing on this one!

Comment by Paul on 11/20/07
Dear Jennifer,
Thank you so much for writing "One Slip". I have never written to an author to thank them for a story. This story was so perfect that I must thank you. It wonderful to read a story that involved a woman and a man engaging in each others fantasies without all the S/M, bondage, and in my opinion over violent, humiliating scenes. You could have had the wife's fantasy becoming on going reality, but you didn't. I am seriously considering asking my wife ( who knows about my crossdressing fetish and accepts it)to read it. It would be wonderful to replicate it in our marriage.
Again, many thanks.
Paul aka Gwen

Comment by Pat on 11/04/07
Jennifer,
You write so wonderfully. I have read many of your stories and I like that you acknowledge that not all cross-dressing fantasies involve the man being forced to be a woman or treated as a slave. You write wonderfully and very descriptive. I have enjoyed reading many of your short works. Keep the muse flowing :)

Comment by DebbieK2 on 10/23/07
Fantastic!

Thanks a million

d
xxxx


Comment by SassySue on 10/22/07
What a wonderful erotic, sexy story; well written as usual.  It's nice to see a story where a husband and wife can both indulge their respective fantasies to their mutual benefit.

Thanks to Jennifer for writng and posting this story.

SS




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