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One Small Step
by Lia Monde

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Comment by Royal CBD on 03/02/21
KKG9bt Just Browsing While I was surfing today I noticed a great article about

Comment by i love pron on 12/21/18
54VU23 Really enjoyed this article.Really looking forward to read more. Really Great.

Comment by Wannabe Ginger on 12/15/14
...... oh, my, oh,  my........ and there was me thinking the special gift for new customers would be his own (first purchase) bra......!!!
Enough thought for a second chapter???  
Please!!!  xx

Comment by crorkz matz on 08/04/14
O0mo9I Great, thanks for sharing this article post. Awesome.

Comment by crorkz matz on 08/03/14
mF3HaR Great article.Really looking forward to read more. Really Cool.

Comment by juliej on 12/14/07
great start reread again next part please

Comment by juliej on 04/10/06
part one was great their are not many stores that would give you personal attention and make sure you tried them on before buying.
for me my first time was nervous but i had no help i feel this story can go on and only get better well done

Comment by juliej on 04/10/06
this story was very interesting part one was great their are not many stores that would give you personal attention and make sure you tried them on before buying for me my first time was nervous but i had no help i feel this story can go on and only get better well done

Comment by Leah on 08/11/05
Dear Lia!

I actually found Kelly's planning and his self-doubt to be highly disturbing --  too much like (I think) reality probably is. And yet I know that not everyone is mean, in fact most people (and here I'm thinking salespeople) are pretty nice. Taking chances is scary!

I almost quit but was well-rewarded for hanging in there.

No ogre! Yet, can I be sure about that? Elizabeth seems a rather coy and kind young lady, but will she turn into a sadistic dominatrix back at her apartment? (She's certainly forward enough to be someone intent on some kind of entrapment.) Crystal has labeled this vignette as "part 01;" I sure hope that means you've been thinking hard and "part 02" is nearly on the way.

Comment by JillMI (Angela Rasch) on 07/05/05
You are a talented writer.

Jill

Comment by SassySue on 05/15/05
What a great outcome (and out cum :) to a panty shopping trip.  Wish it could happen to me.

Keep up the good work!

SS



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