E8W4bL Im grateful for the article.Really looking forward to read more. Awesome.

cKDN6B Fantastic post.Thanks Again. Awesome.

lDIJlf Thanks for the article post.Really thank you! Much obliged.

No comment because your story has no end.

Not a bad story but I would really want to know if Chris was successful in being a girl.

come on? most of the storys i've read was so-so. but yours? i want to read over and over again. whats  going to happen next? is she going to get her wish or not?

Definitely it's One Summer in Hell, and that is where we are left --  with an extremely likable main character who couldn't scarcely wind up being more out of place, or more miserable... In the shower scene, though, I wish he'd kneed Darren in the groin, or at least reported him afterwards...

I doubted this would be complete and I was right. It's NOT.
Why is 8-2001 new?  It's now 6-2008.
It seems like a nice story.  It could have gotten interesting.  I had some trouble trying to tell where it was going, but since it stopped so early in the story, I was very disappointed.

It's confusing that it ends so soon.
I hope it was voluntary.

Thanks for a good read anyway :)
Yoron

Awh, only on Chapter two here but I like it a lot.
It's funny and cool.
And this little (wo)mans attitude is totally wholesome :)
I'm hoping for a real good read here.

Thanks for not making it into a 'sissy' tale.

cheers
Yoron.

So  it is like a hot date where you get a huge hard on and painful balls and the girl says  NO in no uncertain tones of STOP!!!!!  Here I was ready to watch this sweet little screwed up 14 year old be taken to a place where he would emerge as the girl of his dreams and you woke him up at the very last minute ....now please help me by finishing this well written story.   Thank you

Great story so far, very dissapointed that it was incomplete when I got to the end of the story. It has great potential, hopefully you will read this and continue on.

Great work once again

Love Jen xoxoxo

Really nice start, and a shame this didn't get any further.

SHURE DO WISH YOU WOULD FINISH THIS STORY....YOU HAVE A GOOD WRITING TALENT AND A FINE STORY.....PLEASE CAN i HAVE MORE..OLIVER....
THANK YOU  ....RONE ..

this was a really goood story and i really enjoyed reading it i look forward to reading further installments.

Would love to talk to you about the story.  Would you be willing to contact me?  Please?

Thanks
Wendy

Aaaaaagh!  I can't bear it!  This was such a wonderful, promising story, and it just stops short in the middle of day 2!  I loved the character development, and the slow, intricate pace of the story.  It's clear that Rei must have had to stop her story years ago, so it's hopeless to wish for more.  But I still do.  All I can do is sit here and forlornly imagine the potential plotlines.  I'm guessing now, of course, but...

How long would it be before Chris finds out that his nemesis Darren is playing soccer too, and wants to cream him/her?  How long would it be before Chris finally gets some real, actually-noticeable chest development and panics over trying to hide things?  And how long before Chris learns enough to realize that he/she has the perfect out: the girls' camp only 'five miles' away: Chris has makeup, training bras, and black satin pants; one girly shirt, and she's passing!

Where are the various threads leading?  Oh brother, I really need the Cliff Notes version of the remaining forty chapters.  :-)  :-)

Rei, wherever you are, thanks for the great chapters you wrote, and my condolences that something came up to stop you from finishing.

Love,
Diane

Wonderful story so far, with tremendous potential.  How unfortunate that circumstances have evidently forced the termination of such a great story.  Good luck to you Rei, whatever you are now doing.

Too bad this one died an early death.  It had potential.

Yes,

This was well written - and I will enjoy seeing future installments. Whilst coming from Britain I did attend an american summer camp in Pennsylvania some years ago as a counsellor. This has a ring of truth to it even to a non-american.

Well done

Keep it up.

Love it, so far, hurry with the next installment before I burst with anticipation.

Rea
I like the story.. but dammit.. your another one that waits two or three months between chapters.. your driving me crazy..

I went to summer camp as a child.. I also decided after being raped that I didnt need to be there anymore and went AWOL... if your camper is smart.. she should do the same thing.. while she still can..

byeeeeeeeeeeee

    I don't usually like or read serials but I was deeply touched by these stories and I eagerly await the next one.

My silence is testimony to the impact of your writting.

Rei, Terrifically good work, realistic portrayal and development of characters.  Just read all 3 straight through, am going to be watching for more, and pray you have the time and energy to keep going with this tale.  Thank you, Joanna

Wow, what a great story. I can't express how superbly written this story is. Ms. McCall this story is written so good in such detail and feeling. I suspect it might be somewhat autobiographical. WELL?
Love and Warmth
Pickles

If this goes the way I suspect it's going to go, this is going to be one terrific story.

Waiting with bated breath...

Pervy

this is a very impressive debut. i've only read part 1 so far but your use of language is great - excellent voice. i'm interested in seeing where you eventually go with the parental units and acceptance, and exactly how this camp thing will turn out.

camp.ugh.

found part 2 much better and more enjoyable than part 1.

I can't get over how much your story is my actual life.
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I didn't go to 'camp'  I went to a 'school' for bad boys.  It was a religous love in and macho confidence course winter survival bullshit type place instead... pretty much the same thing without the canoes and nice weather.

So far, so good.  I'm looking forward to part II.  I like the idea of the parents NOT being understanding and sending him to what I assume will be some kind of "Be A Man" boot-type camp.  I'm interested in seeing how this intelligent young lady will subvert the system :-)  Reminds me of Ellen Hayes "Tucky Seasons" where Tucks parents want to send him to that type of camp.

the story itself was well written and the writer did a good job even if the subject (which remind me of the video BUT I'M A CHEERLEADER) isn't my cup of tea.

For a first story posting here at StorySite I think the author has done a fine job. A few places a word may be misspelled, still the story moves quite well and the elements of the story, although used at times by others is very well presented.
I think as this is the first part of a continuing story, it will develop into a fine tale which I will enjoy reading as more of it is posted.
I rather enjoyed the way the story is being explained by the boy who will I'm sure turn into the lovely girl, as he/she wishes she had been born.