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One Sunday Afternoon
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Comment by suba suba on 11/07/19
FoEOU8 Well I really enjoyed reading it. This tip offered by you is very helpful for accurate planning. Comment by crorkz on 08/04/14 pDT0LG Muchos Gracias for your post.Really thank you! Really Cool. Comment by cheap backlinks on 07/18/14 wR1ppM Fantastic article post.Much thanks again. Really Cool. Comment by Hydie on 11/21/08 I think that someone should have edited this story before letting it go into print. Comment by Mistress Meredith on 10/01/08 It appears Mistress Amber and Mistress Sandy have plenty in mind for maid natalia -- I do hope we get to share those experiences. Comment by Priscilla Ann on 03/27/08 Hmm, seems that natalie is in for a few more surprises since he/she is now maid to Mistress Sandy and Mistress Amber. A wonderful start. More please Comment by juliej on 01/13/08 this is a good start to this story please continue it would be nice to get him doing far more femmine things and being locked up at night to prevent any attempt to escape they should also start feeding him hormones to change him completly Comment by Angela E. on 09/03/07 I agree with the others on the technical aspects but please,don't let that stop you from writing more,your story shows a lot of potential. Comment by camila on 09/03/07 Hon, I have to agree with many others. Your story could be good but it was completely ruined by all the mistakes and yes please have it spell and grammar checked. Maybe there is somebody who can proofread it? Otherwise, do continue! Comment by Krissy on 09/02/07 Really fun! :) Comment by Paula Jutras on 09/01/07 great new story. Hope to read more of your work in future. Comment by charlene on 08/31/07 Please add info about his hair, maybe a perm or several curlers Comment by DJ on 08/31/07 Great story but use spell and grammer check. most are free. I thought it was funny how they are going to make him work of the botique dept which was for him but they went out and bought it. Comment by Anne Zvesteit on 08/31/07 Good story, but please use the spelling and grammar check included in all modern word processors. There are free ones if you look. Comment by Caroline on 08/31/07 Come on, love, try to write something readable, this is a nice concept totally ruined by lousy spelling and no punctuation. Comment by Valentine on 08/31/07 You need to learn to use proper capitalization, punctuation, grammar, and spelling. |
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