Hi Ann.
Jezzi Belle said everything!
Well done.
Kisses.
Silvia.

YAY! You got it right sugar! Sissies/submissives can only be pushed so far before they start to push back. Thanks for this!

GREAT STORY OF REVENGE. HOW SWEET IT IS!

a good story of revenge the old fashioned way but more explanation would have been better

The story tells the truth of how far a person can be forced to endure a siduation before they snap, so doms before warnded, all's fair in love an domination. Just kidding the story was great!!!!!

i liked this story af a man forced into doing what he does not ant to do with his wife being abusive this is very bad its a pity it came to murder it would have been better to get revenge in a better way which would make the story longer but well written

a short story but very interesting how a male got his revenge and his freedom more work on this would make far better but a brilliant start as to where he got the weapon who knows

*WHOOPS!*
Sorry about the double post. :)
--John

About time I saw a story in which an abused "sissy" got even with his tormentor!
The only complaint I have is that Annie fell into the old Hollyweird (YES, that misspelling IS intentional) trap--specifically, the protagonist used a silenced *revolver* to accomplish the deed.
Anybody who knows anything about firearms will tell you that, under most circumstances, revolvers *CANNOT* be effectively silenced, because gas, and hence *NOISE*, escapes from gaps in the mechanism. The old TV and movie trick of "let's screw a silencer onto the barrel of a revolver and have it make little or no noise" is a *MYTH*.
They can be silenced, but it would involve completely enclosing the mechanism in a gas-tight sleeve. (Wrapping the gun in a sealed piece of plastic or rubber tubing (inner tube material) also works.)
*NO*, I *DON'T* have personal experience. :) I read a lot is all.
However, I mean no criticism of Annie's work; I was merely saying that she should have read some reference materials on the subject before putting something like that into print.
I also worked as a proofreader for 12 years (March 1988 to August 2000), so I know a little about correcting authors' works.
--John

About time I saw a story in which an abused "sissy" got even with his tormentor!
The only complaint I have is that Annie fell into the old Hollyweird (YES, that misspelling IS intentional) trap--specifically, the protagonist used a silenced *revolver* to accomplish the deed.
Anybody who knows anything about firearms will tell you that, under most circumstances, revolvers *CANNOT* be effectively silenced, because gas, and hence *NOISE*, escapes from gaps in the mechanism. The old TV and movie trick of "let's screw a silencer onto the barrel of a revolver and have it make little or no noise" is a *MYTH*.
They can be silenced, but it would involve completely enclosing the mechanism in a gas-tight sleeve. (Wrapping the gun in a sealed piece of plastic or rubber tubing (inner tube material) also works.)
*NO*, I *DON'T* have personal experience. :) I read a lot is all.
However, I mean no criticism of Annie's work; I was merely saying that she should have read some reference materials on the subject before putting something like that into print.
I also worked as a proofreader for 12 years (March 1988 to August 2000), so I know a little about correcting authors' works.

Another trip to the dark side; I liked it.  I would have put a bra and panties on the guy before putting the gun in his hand :-)
  Jezzi

A short story of someone pushed too far for too long. It reads more like fact than fiction. I think the rebelion of the subjugated should happen more often in this type of story.

Splendid!  Perfect!  Marvellous!  A perfect instance of the "Why
doesn't someone...?" kind of story.  In forced fem. stories, one
has to tread a rather narrow line between titillation on one hand
and nastiness on the other.  And here is the nasty story I've
dreamed of, where the nastiness...but I won't spoil the story for
those who haven't read it yet.

Satisfying & gratifying on a deep level.  I'm lost in admiration
and delight.

Pervy

a good story .kindness will always bring out the best in a person. it's a shame that the wife in the story didn't think of that.

fun story.  about time!

but way too many !!!s  Your story would have read better with 1/3 as many, IMNSHO.

but keep it up.