I tried to read this story, but the lack of punctuation and terrible grammar made it impossible to read.  Get a copy editor!

Not a bad story, but it desperately needs a good editor to correct the misspellings and poor punctuation which greatly distract from the overall enjoyment of the story.

That being said, I did enjoy it.  It looks like our poor protagonist is being set up by Jan and Carol for a lifetime of servitude and chastity while they are free to have sex with whomever they choose.  I compare it favorably with some of Vickie Terns' best.  I just hope that poor Alan does get relief when the month is up.

SS

Wonderfully told tale of feminization and domination, Ms. Smith. Sounds as if Mistress Jan and Mistress Carol are going to keep maid Alanah quite busy for a very long time to come. I like the image of maid Alanah ironing Mistress' clothes. I also think having maid Alanah write her rules thousands of times is a wonderful and productive form of punishment. Yes, each of the these two brilliant young women has exhibted the great instincts it takes to me demanding dominatrix. Bravo, Mistresses.

Sounds as if Alahna got exactly what he/she deserved and was very well set up by Jan and Carol. Overall, a great story, Ms. Smith. Thank you.

Really good story. Please continue. I like the sinking deeper in trouble aspect.

Sally,

  Part two is a bit hard to follow.  What happened to all the apostrophes?

Deni

interesting story a bit fast paced with a lot of spelling mistakes but good overall

great story but I hope the wife doesn't leave him for another man. Even though she seem to be trying to get even with him by going to the bar and all hope she loves her husband.

Fantastic simple plot story. Look forward to the next installment to see what happens next and how long he really stuck the way he is and how far things go.

   GREAT START.PLEASE MORE. I'M HOOK ON CROSS DRESSING AND BEENING SOMEONES MAID.STARTED WHEN I WAS A KID.

Great story.  I hope you continue it.